on Moon and Azalea by Aidaho
6 Jan 2003, 6:03 AM
Damn good!
on red lorry yellow lorry by deano
6 Jan 2003, 6:01 AM
Fuck off
on A Man's Best Friend. by DewDrop
6 Jan 2003, 6:00 AM
Hnufhnufhnuf
Very funny...very, very funny...have 9
Very funny...very, very funny...have 9
replying on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger
6 Jan 2003, 5:58 AM
Um...
on Jewel by cleverdevice
6 Jan 2003, 2:40 AM
Cleverdevice, you rule!
replying on joyriding by Bill Z Bub
6 Jan 2003, 2:39 AM
Yar, and oim a leprechaun
on Exiting Shadows by Caducus
6 Jan 2003, 2:24 AM
Oh yes..."In a chorus of glorious choirs that strip your flesh in fires", what a line...I'll be saying that all day.
Great poem! 9
Great poem! 9
replying on The poemranker desk by lunar
4 Jan 2003, 11:38 AM
Ah well, want, fancy, love, you know, they're all the same yet so different it's hard to define them. Never mind.
And yes, he has many, many complex issues!
And yes, he has many, many complex issues!
on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus
4 Jan 2003, 9:54 AM
Very funny. Stanza 4 (especially the last line) is excellent. 9
replying on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger
4 Jan 2003, 9:37 AM
Okay then, fuck the votes. Pretend they don't exist. That still won't help me make this a better poem. I really want people to help me with this because it could potentially be good. If we forget the voting saga, will that encourage you to give me some suggestions?
on The poemranker desk by lunar
4 Jan 2003, 8:43 AM
Tis mighty interesting, methinks. Must've taken a minute or two to make, so I'll give ya an 8 for effort. Do you really want Lark Angel?
on My existance by Twisted Wizard
4 Jan 2003, 5:24 AM
Not, "Do I Exist?", but "Am I Still Here?"
Alternatively, "Am I Still Pissed?"
Alternatively, "Am I Still Pissed?"
replying on Mannequin (draft) by Ranger
4 Jan 2003, 5:06 AM
You learn how to draw statues, dumbfuck.
You have a thing about zero, don't you. Presumably it's the number of your IQ. Or maybe it's the amount of people who like you.
You have a thing about zero, don't you. Presumably it's the number of your IQ. Or maybe it's the amount of people who like you.
replying on A Short Letter by Ranger
4 Jan 2003, 5:04 AM
Why, oh why must you nullify me?
replying on Frozen Angel by Ranger
4 Jan 2003, 5:02 AM
That's an unusual position, I never heard of it before. You were about to say something else at the end of your comment-a what?
I never have met a fuckup quite like you, you're very original.
I never have met a fuckup quite like you, you're very original.
replying on Am I Still Here? by Ranger
4 Jan 2003, 4:57 AM
Thanks! A few people have told me they like that line.
replying on The North Wind by Ranger
4 Jan 2003, 4:56 AM
The format of you is overused.
replying on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger
4 Jan 2003, 4:53 AM
Thank you
replying on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger
4 Jan 2003, 3:13 AM
Aha, some help! Thank you, sir. Two questions:
1-How should I put the ideas from books into common experience?
and
2-Surely that would just make me sound like every other poet who considers themselves 'professional'. What good would that do me? I personally prefer to try something different.
And finally, yes it does bother me that you are going to keep giving my poems a zero just because it bothers me. You're supposed to be one of the proper poets on this site. You're not. A proper poet would give helpful advice and not try to ground young writers into the dirt. Get a better attitude, for chrissakes, the way you are right now benefits nobody.
It's a shame that you will repeatedly vote zeros, I don't vote zeros on yours because that would be unethical.
1-How should I put the ideas from books into common experience?
and
2-Surely that would just make me sound like every other poet who considers themselves 'professional'. What good would that do me? I personally prefer to try something different.
And finally, yes it does bother me that you are going to keep giving my poems a zero just because it bothers me. You're supposed to be one of the proper poets on this site. You're not. A proper poet would give helpful advice and not try to ground young writers into the dirt. Get a better attitude, for chrissakes, the way you are right now benefits nobody.
It's a shame that you will repeatedly vote zeros, I don't vote zeros on yours because that would be unethical.
syllables in three lines that
mean something useful
Quite.