Comments byRanger, 1861–1880 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on The French Shark by -=SeTTle=- 8 Jan 2003, 12:50 AM
Hur hur hee hee. What a fabulous picture...mon dick...mon dieu...heh heh...have a 9 for making me laugh.
This isn't by any chance related to cleverdevice's shark, now, is it?
replying on Persephone by Lynn 7 Jan 2003, 5:30 AM
Wassaapppp?
on To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan 7 Jan 2003, 5:13 AM
Yes
on Shark by cleverdevice 7 Jan 2003, 5:09 AM
Hur hur hur
*crackle* KILLER WHALE AT SIX 'O' CLOCK, REPEAT, KILLER WHALE AT SIX...AAAARRRRGGGHHHHH
replying on Daywalker by Blade 7 Jan 2003, 2:34 AM
I've known Blade for 5 years...he referred me to this site...I see him every day at college...he's one of my best friends...I shattered his porcelain fangs and replaced them with chewing gum...I've voted 0 for all of his poems...how much more do you need to know?
This is nice. However, I still can't see the difference between free verse and prose with extra spaces. Will somebody please enlighten me?!?
on inside me by cherish 7 Jan 2003, 1:52 AM
Not bad. Hits hard for a three-liner.
on Compassion by Kashi 7 Jan 2003, 1:51 AM
A shitload of anonymous votes!
on Shit happens by Bobjim the II 7 Jan 2003, 1:47 AM
Is that to me?
Should I give him a 5? Ok.
on Morning on Galapados by Mikius 7 Jan 2003, 1:46 AM
2nd to last verse is excellent, I like it a great deal.
Not sure about the last line, if I can think of anything better for it I'll let you know.
Only other gripe is that 'fresh' doesn't have an 'a'.
Good work
on The poet by Mikius 7 Jan 2003, 1:44 AM
Nice, perhaps the bit where "something happens" could be emphasised a bit more straight away. Or maybe it's better as it is. I like it. 8
on It Is About by Wulf 7 Jan 2003, 1:10 AM
This is very nice, it really got to me...beautiful and sad, very sweet. 9
on My buttocks are on fire. by Bobjim the II 7 Jan 2003, 1:05 AM
This one's for you, Bobjim.
0
replying on I love kiddies by Bobjim 7 Jan 2003, 1:04 AM
4!!??!! How can you give this four? Arrgghh, this deserves less than zero...but sadly minus fifteen doesn't exist as a vote...this should take its rightful place in the bottom.
0. And a more emphatic ZERO!
on The bouchon by Bachus 7 Jan 2003, 1:02 AM
Ho ho hum ho heh.
8 for the laugh.
on Shit happens by Bobjim the II 7 Jan 2003, 1:00 AM
It sure do.
on My sad life by Bobjim the II 7 Jan 2003, 12:55 AM
Hnur hnur hnur.
You missed the bit where you fall over and it snaps.
And the bit where the dog thinks it's a sausage and...you know the rest.
Here's a 9 for making me laugh!
replying on A Man's Best Friend. by DewDrop 6 Jan 2003, 8:17 AM
Heh heh heh
on Spider by Blade 6 Jan 2003, 8:15 AM
Spider, spider on the wall

SPLAT!

Oh...
on The Dance (Part II) by purplestain 6 Jan 2003, 8:00 AM
...'cause I'm happy just to dance with you...
8