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The poet (Free verse) by Mikius
He sits alone At his wooden desk Head bowed in prayer To the God of poetry He picks up his quill Dips it in the ink And shakes off the excess Poised to write his work The nib gently scratches Leaving marks of deep blue Staining the parchment Like a painting of words And as he sits Something happens To the dry ink And worn-out parchment It comes to life Pouring beauty from it's page A myriad of meanings It breathes And it seeps Into mens minds Whispers in dreams It lives And at his desk The poet sits quietly And his work takes a life Of it's own

Up the ladder: Carson City
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5228
Posted: January 6, 2003 12:46 PM PST; Last modified: January 15, 2003 7:16 AM PST
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[9] cherish @ 68.51.210.55 | 6-Jan-03/2:30 PM | Reply
I love it
great job...go read mine now
[8] Ranger @ 212.219.142.161 | 7-Jan-03/1:44 AM | Reply
Nice, perhaps the bit where "something happens" could be emphasised a bit more straight away. Or maybe it's better as it is. I like it. 8
[n/a] Mikius @ 212.219.142.161 > Ranger | 15-Jan-03/7:15 AM | Reply
I changed it a bit, but I quite like it, as it shows him bringing it to life.
[8] Ranger @ 212.219.142.161 > Mikius | 15-Jan-03/7:29 AM | Reply
Fair enough.
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