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Persephone (Free verse) by Lynn
Yes, it was date rape - and later maybe
Spousal assault, I mean don't you think
Locking your wife underground with things
That are - well - fundamentally dead
Is the kind of a thing a girl should be rescued from?
So of course my mother was right
And she certainly never lied when she
Said she'd be back; and she made me promise
Not to eat or drink anything. I really thought
It was just an ordinary hunger strike.
Or maybe to keep me looking rescuable.
She doesn't herself anymore, you know.
The Earth Mother type, always fussing in the garden
And in the kitchen, baking bread with one hand
And tugging at my waistband with the other.
So when he offered me a few pomegranate seeds -
Opulently red, you know the way they are,
Turning your fingers purple as you dig them out
Of the dead flesh. Oh, I thought they couldn't
Possibly have enough calories to hold me anywhere.
They were sweet, with a bit of a bite. Like his kisses.
What do you want me to say? I admit it's
Controlling and abusive and really if we were
Starting right from the top I would have run a
Little faster in the first place. But now I confess
I like it. I like him. I like the darkness and the screams.
I'd rather be queen of the dead part of the year than
Nobody all of it.
If we were starting from the middle
I'd still open my mouth and let him
Drop those bloody pearls onto my tongue.
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Weighted score: 6.1351175
Overall Rank: 1087
Posted: September 13, 2002 8:32 PM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2002 8:32 PM PDT
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