Death

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Jan 2003 · 5 comments

And then death, Wind of The Spirit's sweet breath, Blown upon my body for the last time.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 3.11 weighted 4.06 rank 13323 views 201 View voting details →

9 votes so far. Yours would make 10.9 votes so far

[1] Ranger 6-Jan-03/7:54 AM Reply

Haiku: seventeen
syllables in three lines that
mean something useful

Quite.

[n/a] Nicholas Jones 16-Jan-03/7:47 AM Reply

Hello Professor Doug - this isn't really a haiku, but who cares? There should be more religious verse on poemranker. Maybe I will try to write some.

[n/a] <~> 16-Jan-03/9:03 AM Reply

'blown' leaves the door open for more verse.
needs to be 'has blown' or 'blew'' methinks.

[4] Robert K Foster 23-May-03/11:03 AM Reply

3
7
10
?

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom 26-May-03/9:40 PM Reply

Decent but as I'm sure you've been told runs long