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Death (Haiku) by dougsoderstrom

And then death, Wind of The Spirit's sweet breath, Blown upon my body for the last time.

<~> 16-Jan-03/9:03 AM
'blown' leaves the door open for more verse.
needs to be 'has blown' or 'blew'' methinks.




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