Comments byRanger, 1761–1780 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger 21 Jan 2003, 1:22 AM
Well now, food for thought indeed! First and foremost, this was written as a lyric because that's what I am best at (although I've just written a free verse which I will submit soon for you lot to read). That is why I a) rhyme and b) use 'fillers'. I personally prefer to have a set rhythm and therefore I attempt to fill it to the best degree possible don't know if that makes any sense, but hey). I agree that in some cases the information is unnecessary, however it tends to be that I'm writing this online and think hmm, that doesn't fit-what can I put in? That is part of the reason why it's not wholly useful.

Anyway, thanks for your help-hope to hear from you a bit later-and I'll submit this other one that I'd like you to read.
replying on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20 Jan 2003, 8:12 AM
81% vilanelle! Love it!
"Reception bellington", wonderful...here have a nine, this rocks!
on Mooseknuckle MacFoofingtons by Bachus 20 Jan 2003, 4:10 AM
That's just nitpicking. I love this.
on Disgusting Stickmen by Bobjim 17 Jan 2003, 12:01 PM
Anyone in particular?
on In Winter by Bobjim 17 Jan 2003, 11:50 AM
Nice of you to tell us you plagerized it, though. That clears that up.
on In Winter by Bobjim 17 Jan 2003, 11:49 AM
Wankmonkey
on Who Flamed Roger Rabbit? by poemwanker 17 Jan 2003, 11:48 AM
Poo.
on beat myself with a stick by sir_heff 17 Jan 2003, 10:55 AM
Do you now?
on Sex by MuDvAyNe 17 Jan 2003, 10:53 AM
Surely virtual sex isn't as good as the real thing now, is it? Try masturbation.
on dark angel is a whore by UAFANTHORPEY 17 Jan 2003, 5:01 AM
Possibly I should say it again?
No.
on dark angel is a whore by UAFANTHORPEY 17 Jan 2003, 5:01 AM
No.
No.
on Unmasking Wyverns by horus8 17 Jan 2003, 4:55 AM
This is magnificent, sir. Many congratulations to you! I will hereby grant you a nine and stop this strangely pretentious speech of mine etc. etc.
replying on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub 16 Jan 2003, 8:15 AM
Beg pardon, I meant your poetry. Stupid keyboard.
on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub 16 Jan 2003, 8:14 AM
Ah, ya bastard. You sit down, braindead and write very fast and this comes out. I've spent fucking weeks on a poem and it's still bollocks. Grr.

10. Much respect for you poetry.
on All you can eat by flatliner 16 Jan 2003, 8:12 AM
Good.
on Women Fight Dirty by scitz 16 Jan 2003, 8:00 AM
Well it looks like you deserved this one!

Last line cracked me up. 8
replying on distance by Crakyamuni 16 Jan 2003, 7:58 AM
Don't mean to sound bullish or anything-it's just that the old 'dance of death' etc doesn't fit in with this.
on distance by Crakyamuni 16 Jan 2003, 7:58 AM
Take out line three and I will give this an 8-it's nice.
on Old Man by keatsImnot 16 Jan 2003, 7:44 AM
I met an old guy in France who was a soldier many years before. He spoke better English than most Englishmen.
on Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus 16 Jan 2003, 7:38 AM
Argh, do I laugh hysterically and vote you a ten or do I think "racist American" and vote zero? I dunno, I think I'll go for "Do bugger all". Yes, that works.