| Re: dark angel is a whore by UAFANTHORPEY |
17-Jan-03/5:01 AM |
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| Re: dark angel is a whore by UAFANTHORPEY |
17-Jan-03/5:01 AM |
Possibly I should say it again?
No.
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| Re: Sex by MuDvAyNe |
17-Jan-03/10:53 AM |
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Surely virtual sex isn't as good as the real thing now, is it? Try masturbation.
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| Re: beat myself with a stick by sir_heff |
17-Jan-03/10:55 AM |
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| Re: Who Flamed Roger Rabbit? by poemwanker |
17-Jan-03/11:48 AM |
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| Re: In Winter by Bobjim |
17-Jan-03/11:49 AM |
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| Re: In Winter by Bobjim |
17-Jan-03/11:50 AM |
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Nice of you to tell us you plagerized it, though. That clears that up.
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| Re: Disgusting Stickmen by Bobjim |
17-Jan-03/12:01 PM |
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| Re: Mooseknuckle MacFoofingtons by Bachus |
20-Jan-03/4:10 AM |
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That's just nitpicking. I love this.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Jan-03/4:11 AM |
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PCs have better games. HALF-LIFE IS STILL THE BEST GAME EVER!!!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Jan-03/8:29 AM |
Oh yes.
It was worth every single penny of it!
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| Re: Surreal by wordontheverge |
21-Jan-03/1:29 AM |
Like the end! Nice work, perhaps you could do another version of this and bring out the surreality (just for lil old me!) because I'd love to see more images-check out my 'Am I Still Here' if you want.
Yes anyway, a good poem here's a nine.
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| Re: Alms for the Digger by Wulf |
21-Jan-03/1:33 AM |
First verse doesn't seem to fit with the feel of the rest of this one. Take it out and turn it into a new poem 'cause it's great (well I really like it!).
I'm not sure what to vote this, I'll have another read and think about it.
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21-Jan-03/1:34 AM |
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| Re: Liberty bells & Disney Land by horus8 |
21-Jan-03/1:37 AM |
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| Re: Tree (WARNING: do NOT hug!) by Yardbird |
21-Jan-03/5:07 AM |
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Marvellous...just marvellous.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
22-Jan-03/12:57 PM |
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Kind of agree with mr p&k. Even so it looks promising as a song-nice one!
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| Re: Sex with a hairy brazilian by scitz |
22-Jan-03/1:15 PM |
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Good work, scitz, good work!
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| Re: The Queen Mums Teeth by scitz |
22-Jan-03/1:17 PM |
Oh dear, scitz, you crack me up yet again...9!
And yes, ewoks do kick ass (if they can reach, that is!)
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| Re: The last day of an old year by poetandknowit |
23-Jan-03/11:18 AM |
An enjoyable read (although it was quite difficult to concentrate-must not listen to Crash Test Dummies while reading poetry!).
Yes, anyway-this is good, Mr. poetandknowit. I especially like the last bit of the second stanza very much. It's something slightly different to normal.
Perhaps now that I've acknowledged you're a good writer you'll feel more inclined to give me some help? :)
It would be greatly appreciated.
Regardless, I think I'll give this a nine.
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