Re: Spam by Blade	8-May-03/1:41 PM
Damn I enjoyed that. For once I can safely give this a 0 without even a slight feeling of remorse. Here. See?
Re: Blues by Christof	8-May-03/1:51 PM
Hey Christof it's nice to see you're back, submit something soon!
Re: AIDS in a nurse by <{Baba^Yaga}>	8-May-03/1:54 PM
Yikes! Funny, very funny most certainly. I'd like to see "even gets" changed around, it sounds better. 8
Re: Jokie Smurf by Bachus	16-May-03/7:52 AM
Marvellous as always Mr. B.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-May-03/7:56 AM
Most certainly, but for how long do we think the ranker will remain unblocked? Here this made me laugh, and passing references to the fjords earns this an 8
Re: Ode To Mushroomhead by Beseech	16-May-03/7:58 AM
Ye-es
Re: John Denver's hang-glider by horus8	16-May-03/8:02 AM
Glorious. AT LAST THE COLLEGE HAS UNBLOCKED THE RANKER!!! I am now in a generous mood, have a ten on the house.
Re: Not quite myselfs. by cleverdevice	18-May-03/11:38 AM
Yep.
Re: Darkness ( A tribute to the poem FOOTPRINTS) by Mr Pig	18-May-03/11:42 AM
It does seem a bit too loose in places, and 'I was very angry with God' doesn't really do credit to your ability. Even so it's an enjoyable read, and nice to see people trying something a bit more traditional/ classical (and succeeding!) 9
regarding some deleted poem...	18-May-03/11:43 AM
*YAAAWWWN*-oh, no, not at all
regarding some deleted poem...	18-May-03/11:45 AM
Was it you who told me that if you do the search for kaolin fire on here all it comes up with is something by poemwanker? If so I can see another addition to that list. Very thoughtful piece, monsieur. 9
Re: My Nieghborhood(2) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	18-May-03/11:49 AM
Yeah I suppose it does need editing, but I actually really like the way this one's going! 7
Re: Recipe for Regaining Youth by Blade	18-May-03/11:54 AM
This has currently only got one comment-mine-and I really can't see that changing. However I would urge everybody who read it to vote it a zero; who knows we might just get this one an average of 0.00 Let me lead the way.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-May-03/9:03 AM
Poor, mr. B, very poor... Like "Stuck To The Hob", but less classy. Much less classy.
Re: Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT	17-Apr-05/12:53 PM
Lovely, I particularly liked the fountain and the exchange of stone to grass. The Stock Exchange on weed...that would be something worth seeing
Re: The Layer of Black by emilyowey	17-Apr-05/12:55 PM
As a student I feel obliged to be wracked with guilt at not being black, impoverished or in prison (or any combination thereof)
Re: Virgin Poet by emilyowey	17-Apr-05/12:59 PM
Preach my pain also, oh how I long for those youthful days too. I appreciate this. 9
Re: the Dreamer by darylchew	17-Apr-05/1:08 PM
I guarantee people on this highly-accommodating site will slate this. Make it humorous and you might convert them. Perhaps after the 'will he ever act' you could put something like 'will he remember to breathe?' or maybe 'will he contract AIDS?' (although the answer to that seems quite obvious to me). It's a decent start, and as someone wise on here said to me, not necessarily in these exact words, be unto yourself true. If you like your poetry that's the most important thing - unless of course you harbour dreams of getting them published. Then you have to pander to the masses. 7
Re: The Incubation by oneglove	17-Apr-05/1:10 PM
Glorious
Re: f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_	19-Apr-05/1:14 PM
Oddly enough the big votes here do seem to go with the big words rather than the big attitudes. I liked being shouted at although a couple of the rhymes weren't my cup of tea (although I'm in no position to criticise other peoples' rhymes), 8 from me.