Re: Dust by Caducus	2-Dec-02/3:12 PM
I really enjoyed this...merely a nearly...love that line
Re: two poles are better than one by <~>	26-Nov-02/10:42 AM
This was wonderful
Re: blinded by bxjay170	26-Nov-02/10:32 AM
I have to agree with Cadacus on this. The spelling and grammer errors make it almost unbearable to read. Give it a once over before you post next time. I do like the last line though...it sums it up nicely.
Re: a comment on Liar by Goose	26-Nov-02/8:21 AM
I might give that a try. I have always found the less I say the better. Thanks for the advice!
Re: Small Town Snow by OneFingerAnswer	25-Nov-02/8:24 PM
you must be from my city! I like it...dead on description of small towns
Re: Maria's ways on how to deal with puberty! by little_angel_maria	25-Nov-02/4:12 PM
I liked the last two poems of yours, but really....you can do better than this
Re: *I am me* by savannah	19-Nov-02/8:41 PM
I think this is just precious and it made me smile.
Re: boy girl by little_angel_maria	19-Nov-02/6:09 PM
This is pretty cool....
Re: confused by little_angel_maria	19-Nov-02/6:01 PM
I can tell you are sad so I hate to say this, but I think you stole a line from Nights in White Satin by the Moody Blues....people tell me thoughts they cannot defend....Plus s4 reminds me of a Pink song.... Hazard to Myself I think is the one.
Re: Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl	19-Nov-02/4:51 PM
I like this. It makes me think about my own "sisters"
Re: The Breathing Dead by Caducus	19-Nov-02/8:38 AM
This is sad...i love the first two lines
Re: a comment on missing you by Goose	19-Nov-02/8:28 AM
I agree with you. Thanks for the input. I have dropped those last two lines and I like it lots better.
Re: a comment on Boy I Know by Goose	18-Nov-02/1:56 PM
Hmmm...interesting viewpoint. I was actually agreeeing with you. When I wrote something that "smacks of judgment" I was opening myself up to be judged. You are entertaining to listen to though. I appreciate the feedback.
Re: Faith... by loneshadow29	18-Nov-02/1:13 PM
I like it !
Re: a comment on Boy I Know by Goose	18-Nov-02/12:54 PM
As your husband wrote in the greatest of all books...Judge not lest ye be judged.