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Boy I Know (Free verse) by Goose 25 going on 26
Smart as a whip and shoots from the hip
Could be anything he wants
doctor,lawyer,scientist
He would just rather sit and gather dust
He doesn't trust the way he thinks
So he drinks to much and gets stoned and
is all alone
Except for the folks who are nothing but jokes themselves
it is so sad how a promising life can go so bad
Up the ladder:
Mystery on the Bridge
Down the ladder:
Beliefs?
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Posted: November 18, 2002 12:00 PM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2002 12:00 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7542 Comments:
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god'swife @ 209.178.177.153
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18-Nov-02/12:24 PM
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Yuo are discribing every ding-dong on this site. Including me, though I am feminine and old. Of course we do have one or two Phd.s hanging about, but they are expert in ideas and words. Hah. As if that where something worthwhile. They can't fill a cavity or a prescription. They can come at you with words,and words and even more words. No cure. Quite the contrary, they breed schizophrenia in this weak culture of ours. Subversives. Spending untold thousands just to toss around the acedemic ball. You're friend has promised nothing, and owes nothing. It's 'too' not 'to' in line 7. Your poem smacks of judgement, and righteuos indignation, Pee-you
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Goose @ 152.163.188.7
> god'swife
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18-Nov-02/12:54 PM
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As your husband wrote in the greatest of all books...Judge not lest ye be judged.
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<~> @ 167.206.181.179
> Goose
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18-Nov-02/1:13 PM
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hey, what's good for the goose is not good for the gander anyway.
I understand that
damn. i am fresh out of tissues too. oh well. the crocodiles can have em.
maybe change the first line to '25 going on dead'?
delightful. 8.
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