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Boy I Know (Free verse) by Goose

25 going on 26 Smart as a whip and shoots from the hip Could be anything he wants doctor,lawyer,scientist He would just rather sit and gather dust He doesn't trust the way he thinks So he drinks to much and gets stoned and is all alone Except for the folks who are nothing but jokes themselves it is so sad how a promising life can go so bad

<~> 18-Nov-02/12:36 PM
damn. i am fresh out of tissues too. oh well. the crocodiles can have em.
maybe change the first line to '25 going on dead'?




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