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Liar

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

With a straight face sometimes a smile I look into your eyes and lie It doesn't matter what the topic I am quick on my feet and meet all your questions with complete fabrications

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4 comments

[9] Bachus 25-Nov-02/6:04 PM Reply

shhhhh. 9.

[8] Ranger 26-Nov-02/1:12 AM Reply

Wow, Bachus must really like you.

[7] Caducus 26-Nov-02/3:54 AM Reply

This would be better as a Haiku, as it stands its still good but I would be interested to see how much more you could say with less.

Hope I haven't cooked your goose, Mr Goose -7-

[n/a] Goose › Caducus 26-Nov-02/8:21 AM Reply

I might give that a try. I have always found the less I say the better. Thanks for the advice!