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Liar (Free verse) by Goose With a straight face
sometimes a smile
I look into your eyes and lie
It doesn't matter what the topic
I am quick on my feet
and meet all your questions
with complete fabrications
Up the ladder:
Orders to My Zombie Legions
Down the ladder:
Positivism and Behaviourism:They Suck
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Posted: November 25, 2002 2:16 PM PST; Last modified: November 25, 2002 2:16 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.7310586 Overall Rank: 1840 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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25-Nov-02/6:04 PM
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shhhhh. 9.
Wow, Bachus must really like you.
This would be better as a Haiku, as it stands its still good but I would be interested to see how much more you could say with less.
Hope I haven't cooked your goose, Mr Goose -7-
I might give that a try. I have always found the less I say the better. Thanks for the advice!
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