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Liar (Free verse) by Goose

With a straight face sometimes a smile I look into your eyes and lie It doesn't matter what the topic I am quick on my feet and meet all your questions with complete fabrications

Caducus 26-Nov-02/3:54 AM
This would be better as a Haiku, as it stands its still good but I would be interested to see how much more you could say with less.

Hope I haven't cooked your goose, Mr Goose -7-




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