| Re: a comment on Poetic Profit by Dovina |
4-Jan-05/7:43 AM |
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| Re: What I Do Know by PsydewaysTears |
3-Jan-05/8:17 PM |
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Ah! There's nothing like getting your little head to pop one off first thing in the morning to let you know you're still alive.
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| Re: Poetic Profit by Dovina |
3-Jan-05/8:13 PM |
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Hey, I like this guy. He and I could sing a couple of good old country songs togther. "He Stopped Loving Her Today," "Didn't Know God Made Honky Tonk Angels" and the like. Was he drinking an American Brew? I prefer a dark beer myself with plenty of salty nuts.
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| Re: Math Poem 3 by Dovina |
2-Jan-05/7:19 AM |
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I'm sorry, Miss Dovina. The dog ate my math homework.
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| Re: a comment on Math Poem 2 by Dovina |
31-Dec-04/8:31 AM |
Will there be a Math Poem 3? I can hardly wait to find out if 3=1+1+1 or if 3=cute+more cuter+most cutest.
Actually, the only math I understand is the bills and paycheck in my hand=0.
I'm going to pawn my bass today so I can buy a bottle of Andre's Champagne for tonight's midnight toast. Happy New Year!!!
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| Re: a comment on Math Poem 2 by Dovina |
30-Dec-04/7:28 PM |
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It's even more cuter as Math 2.
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| Re: My Wife by Dovina |
30-Dec-04/9:03 AM |
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| Re: Math Poem 2 by Dovina |
26-Dec-04/5:50 PM |
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| Re: Pinhole by Dovina |
18-Dec-04/6:54 PM |
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I see where you're going with this poem. I think you could do better if you would rewrite the last two stanzas. You should let go of the uncertainty in the 4th stanza and wrap it up positively in the 5th. So, 'til then a -9- not a -10-.
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| Re: Forsaken Love by Blue Magpie |
15-Dec-04/7:40 AM |
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| Re: exercise by JoyLuck |
15-Dec-04/7:34 AM |
If you lose the last line, it does paint a picture.
My roomate's ex girlfriend tried to come on to me during a ski trip in West Virginia. She slept in my hotel room on the other bed.
My cell phone has more recent outgoing calls than incoming. My buddy list is filled with people I do not know.
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| Re: Better Sex by Dovina |
15-Dec-04/7:28 AM |
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You are a good girl and should submit this poem to Junior Scholastic Magazine.
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| Re: You and Me at Boulder Lake by jessicazee |
14-Dec-04/8:57 AM |
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Haven't been camping for 40 years but this resonates. It is one of 'those' moments that can happen anywhere when you are with 'that' person. Here in LA it could happen at the Mark Taper, in S.F at 'the baths' or in Texas at a barbeque. It needs a bit of tightening to be a -10-.
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| Re: Peptalk in the Dugout by Dovina |
13-Dec-04/8:58 AM |
After watching a baseball game or two, I thought that at the beginning of the action the empire shouted, "Play Balls!" So the players aren't supposed to...uh...you know?
On a completely different subject I discovered a cool 'x' on the lower right-hand corner of the comment box. You can delete comments made by annoying asstrological signers by left-clicking the 'x.' It is part of the "freedom of speech" philosophy on poemranker. You have the right to say anything you want to me in comments. I have the right to delete comments. "America, what a country!" J. Smirnoff
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| Re: I Have... by SupremeDreamer |
12-Dec-04/5:45 AM |
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Preaching to the choir-Amen.
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| Re: That One Time Last Summer, Remember? by jessicazee |
12-Dec-04/5:26 AM |
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| Re: Limbs by Dovina |
10-Dec-04/8:50 AM |
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Are you the lightning, the oak or the result of the meeting of the two? I like being the moss on the North side never seeing the sun. The lightning was bright. It was fun to watch.
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| Re: Love by RION12 |
10-Dec-04/8:36 AM |
Love is a dog from hell- Charles Bukowski.
Love is a live dog in a Korean kitchen (non-existent)-Dan garcia-Black
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| Re: Recognition by nentwined |
7-Dec-04/8:00 AM |
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Makes me want to stand up in a room full of poets and say, "Hi. My name is Dan. I'm a poem-holic."
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| Re: a comment on The Rocketsâ Song by Dovina |
6-Dec-04/10:37 AM |
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