Re: Smile by feelinglistless	14-Jul-02/3:04 PM
A bit cliched, but still nice! Jill S.
Re: Forever Untitled. by LucidRevelation	14-Jul-02/3:03 PM
Not bad! Jill S.
Re: She moves by Oddsboy	14-Jul-02/3:02 PM
I liked the first 4 lines only. Rest did not hang together well enough.
Re: Compassion by Kashi	14-Jul-02/3:01 PM
Don't believe in angels or God but the poem was pretty well written.
Re: Love at 4 A.M. by x311	14-Jul-02/2:59 PM
Too cliched, not very well written.
Re: The beggar in me by dilips_10	14-Jul-02/2:58 PM
I liked it.
Re: Garden by ifni	14-Jul-02/2:57 PM
Liked it muchly! Cute use of metaphor.
Re: MY BURNING RAGE by MEMORIES	14-Jul-02/2:56 PM
Intense. Some cliches, but it felt heartfelt.
Re: Live My Death by Rich Clark	14-Jul-02/2:54 PM
I am guessing you are talking of glaucoma or blindness, not metaphorically. Made me think. Jill S.
Re: Untitled Sonnet #1 by Antwon	14-Jul-02/2:49 PM
Too many cliches.
Re: Something New by feelinglistless	14-Jul-02/2:47 PM
Too similar to others I have read.
Re: My Tongue ..... and God by BadPoet	14-Jul-02/2:44 PM
Sweet, silly.
Re: Untitled #2 by LucidRevelation	14-Jul-02/2:43 PM
Good! Jill S.
Re: Spring Haiku by Staika	14-Jul-02/2:43 PM
Tear and spear don't work as being analagous enough, for me. Jill S. I LOVE "like a heron spearing fish in the cold spring dusk."
Re: loki's end by yarlgrenn	14-Jul-02/2:40 PM
Good strong imagery. I liked it. Jill S.
Re: lost by mitchski	14-Jul-02/2:39 PM
Liked the last stanza, it stands alone better than mixed in with the not-as-well written rest of poem.
Re: Anger Management by wlshepherd	14-Jul-02/2:37 PM
Seems pretty obvious- but you are "telling" not showing, which does not make it very good poetry. Clear thought though.
Re: A clearer lucidity by Eric Johnson	14-Jul-02/2:30 PM
Some good lines- strange use of commas, though.
Re: My Heart Has Trembled by TomKWS	14-Jul-02/2:24 PM
Great last line.
Re: Jericho by goldfish	14-Jul-02/2:20 PM
First line equating ships-plural-with one dove, singular,bothered me a little tho I guess you mean all in a formation created a sight of "one body." Liked how you kept rhyme going, many good images. Jill S.