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The beggar in me (Free verse) by dilips_10
I see in you the eyes of mine.
Helpless and life weathered.
But a grim resolve to breathe -
To strive to stay.
That twinkle in your milky gaze
Shows patience and failures;
That calm in your composure
Misconstrues detachment as humiliation;
That silence in your stillness
Mistakes frivolity as insanity;
And as I see you,
I see in you the eyes of mine.
With that begging bowl, you sit
With eyes of mine
I see me no other than you.
With nothing in my mind
But your company for comfort;
With nothing to talk
But for all our mute talk;
With a view to stare
As we breathe in unison;
I sit for moments with you ripe life,
Satiating the beggar in me -
On this slab where you dwell
And as I move on,
I see in you the eyes of mine
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.1
Overall Rank: 6056
Posted: June 27, 2002 1:40 PM PDT; Last modified: June 27, 2002 1:40 PM PDT
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