cake

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

playing with my barbies... getting dirt in my dry swim suit. foot/foot; hand/hand; foot/foot. i leave cartwheel prints in the sand: the frosting on your cake. the buttercream roses are. suffocating me as i fall, so i dress myself in them, and hide under the bride's skirt. the frosting stains my skin sweet.

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[9] horus8 14-Jul-02/6:30 PM Reply

There's Mcdonald's drive thru writing and then there's this.
You have a way. distinct

[n/a] roses are read 21-Jul-02/7:54 PM Reply

thanks!