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Anger Management (Free verse) by wlshepherd Sometimes when I get angry
I just feel really mad
And I hate everyone
And I dont want to talk to anyone.
Een though I shout at them,
People sometimes still talk to me
And sometimes it makes me feel worse,
But sometimes it makes me feel better.
Like if they say something that makes me laugh,
Or remember something good,
Or if what they say
Puts what I am mad about in a perspective,
Where I see that it itsn't so important
That I shout at people.
Up the ladder:
Stars In My Eyes
Down the ladder:
my body is a battle ground
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Posted: May 16, 2002 10:31 AM PDT; Last modified: May 16, 2002 10:31 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.329863 Overall Rank: 13079 Comments:
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anonymous @ 204.245.176.100
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16-May-02/1:19 PM
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keep talking yourself through it... you'll eventually come so some TOTALLY OBVIOUS CONCLUSION
not a poem; this is diary notes (to edit out in case of publication)
you feel mad SOMETIMES when you get angry..? how about those other times? they could be more interesting..not if you stay on the surface of nothing at all though
Yes. Perspective. Yes. There are so many issues out there. Like abortion, nudity, poverty and nudity to name but a few. I guess we all need a little perspective from time to time, right guys!?
Seems pretty obvious- but you are "telling" not showing, which does
not make it very good poetry. Clear thought though.
itz all too true dude.
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