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Garden (Free verse) by ifni
I want my own garden- a little corner of technogeekdom to nurture and keep- the 'net breathes for me, a living thing- can't you hear it's heartbeat? I want my own garden to keep, with the wild viri and the worms underneath, and all the chaotic thrumming that twines through its soul. 8/23/01

Down the ladder: Atlanta to Albany

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5721
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST; Last modified: August 7, 2002 11:18 PM PDT
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[n/a] nentwined @ | 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM | Reply
pretty but I find it too much like prose to wrap myself in.
[n/a] deleted user @ | 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM | Reply
Very nice. Made me think of a Frost poem -- but I can't think of the name.
[7] forestchild7 @ 216.77.209.45 | 9-Jul-02/3:29 PM | Reply
cute and silly... not bad... although I don't know what virii are?? *smile*
[8] Jill Stockinger @ 209.162.37.68 | 14-Jul-02/2:57 PM | Reply
Liked it muchly! Cute use of metaphor.
[10] Tekara @ 66.218.35.193 | 20-Sep-02/12:26 AM | Reply
Wish I had seen this one earlier. It's just neat!
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