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Garden (Free verse) by ifni I want my own garden-
a little corner of technogeekdom
to nurture and keep-
the 'net breathes for me,
a living thing-
can't you hear it's heartbeat?
I want my own garden to keep,
with the wild viri
and the worms underneath,
and all the chaotic thrumming
that twines through its soul.
8/23/01
Up the ladder:
Love Slain
Down the ladder:
Atlanta to Albany
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:14 AM PST; Last modified: August 7, 2002 11:18 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5722 Comments:
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16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
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pretty but I find it too much like prose to wrap myself in.
Very nice. Made me think of a Frost poem -- but I can't think of the name.
cute and silly... not bad... although I don't know what virii are?? *smile*
Liked it muchly! Cute use of metaphor.
Wish I had seen this one earlier. It's just neat!
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