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She moves (Free verse) by Oddsboy She moves
like dark rainwater,
like slick ink
she moves.
like alley???s
twisting, churning
burning
down my mind she slides.
Storm clouds gather
dance and howl
Up the ladder:
Shit-Crumpets for supper!
Down the ladder:
A Night's Walk By The Brook
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Posted: July 11, 2002 12:49 PM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2002 12:49 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.7310586 Overall Rank: 11782 Comments:
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Rest did not hang together well
enough.