She moves

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Jul 2002 · 1 comment

She moves like dark rainwater, like slick ink she moves. like alley???s twisting, churning burning down my mind she slides. Storm clouds gather dance and howl

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[5] Jill Stockinger 14-Jul-02/3:02 PM Reply

I liked the first 4 lines only.
Rest did not hang together well
enough.