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20 most recent comments by cleverdevice (181-200) and replies

Re: a comment on Truths by Nicholas Jones 25-Oct-02/2:40 AM
Society has based itself around cirrency and gains, everything must cost something. You can't keep pulling money out of thin air. Besides, with regards to instruments of war, how can you say that protecting yourself against attack isn't important, Hasn't 9/11 taught you anything?
Re: a comment on Truths by Nicholas Jones 25-Oct-02/2:34 AM
I am a Tory actually, but only with regard to the countryside, other than that the tories are just as useless as the lib dems and labour.
Re: Flamin Monkey's by Blade 25-Oct-02/2:22 AM
Haha, that is wonderful.
Re: glue by chinstrap 23-Oct-02/4:34 AM
I like it.
Re: Truths by Nicholas Jones 23-Oct-02/4:17 AM
Also, socialism only works in heavan where it's not needed and hell where it's already working. Obvioulsy the awful 60 years of communism in Russia and the Eastern Bloc and the slow return to captitalism by China, Vietnam and Cuba mean nothing? Socialism just leads to oppression because with evryone being the same, the need to be better is only intensified.
Re: Truths by Nicholas Jones 23-Oct-02/4:10 AM
This irritates me as a subject. There is nothing wrong with being middle class. You find we run many of the businesses and companies employing the worker. Without middle class financial investment the economy would completely collapse. Now the aristocracy, they contribute nothing to economy. Yet we must preserve them as it part of (my) culture. Other than that it is sound.
Re: one man opponent by chinstrap 23-Oct-02/4:07 AM
I don't think it needs an exclamation mark. It was going really well untill the last line, 'he is a winner!' just trivializes it I'm afraid.
Re: #17 by mikejedw 23-Oct-02/3:58 AM
Very descriptive. It reminds me why I love Autumn.
Re: Body Language by Ninoy_Instigator 22-Oct-02/5:38 AM
Good.
Re: Blade by Blade 22-Oct-02/5:28 AM
Ok Blade, its quite good really. (your still a cad though,)
Re: A Well Worth Wait by savannah 22-Oct-02/5:18 AM
Nice and uncomplicated.
Re: Gutless by temptalia 22-Oct-02/5:17 AM
Good, except a whole poem about a gunshot? If it were dedicated to someone who had been shot for a good cause it would be very good. However with no personal background it is a bit boring. It would be better if we knew the person who had been shot.
Re: My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus 22-Oct-02/5:15 AM
Well, Its a funny reflection on teen life. A little blunt and insensitive, but I guess thats us teenagers! Good
Re: Love by little_angel_maria 22-Oct-02/5:14 AM
Quite average actually. No depth of character or history. Could be anything which in some cases is good, but here it's just vague.
Re: Daniela by little_angel_maria 22-Oct-02/5:12 AM
Oh, come on. Forgiveness ring a bell? Get over yourself! People take themselves far too seriously these days.
Re: requiem for an ex-girlfriend by natalie 22-Oct-02/5:10 AM
Wow. Very haunting actually. Really makes you think amout your mortality.
Re: Comfort Food by jessicazee 22-Oct-02/5:09 AM
Hmmmmmm. A reasonable effort. It requires reading three times though.
Re: Untitled by LucidRevelation 22-Oct-02/5:08 AM
Very dark. Very effective, Well done.
Re: Stockport by Nicholas Jones 22-Oct-02/5:07 AM
Very good. Stockport is the arsehole of the world isn't it?
Re: The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog 22-Oct-02/3:13 AM
This is oficially the wirst poem, yet i shall vote it as I would a piece of art, as it is.


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