Re: a comment on A Night out With Chaucer by cleverdevice	3-Aug-06/3:09 PM
Don't ask me where this came from.
Re: a comment on The Clock and the Storm by cleverdevice	3-Aug-06/10:49 AM
Nothing wrong with the spelling, I think you'll find
Re: a comment on The Clock and the Storm by cleverdevice	17-Jul-06/2:30 AM
I'm not re-writing the fucker just to make it rhyme!
Re: a comment on To Athena by cleverdevice	17-Jul-06/2:19 AM
I hate to put you wrong, but clearly Facebook.com is the only place to be. I'll see what I can do for football, but being skint the train fair is a little tricky.
Re: August 23, 1944 - 102 miles west of Paris by Ranger	16-Jul-06/8:56 AM
Nice work bro. Made me feel I was there, burning documents that implicated my superiors roles in 'The Final Solution'. No seriously, awesome stuff. The Falaise Gap was one of the most shocking and horrific scenes in all the war. This evokes what I imagine it would have been like once it was eventually quiet.
Re: a comment on To Athena by cleverdevice	16-Jul-06/8:33 AM
I am indeed back in the Shire, soaking up the rays. Its good to be back you know.
Re: a comment on Precious Thing 2 by cleverdevice	5-Jul-04/5:39 AM
Yeah, I dig that. Presumably you've read the first one.
Re: a comment on Where Else to Start But the End by cleverdevice	22-Jun-04/1:37 AM
Most probably because it was written last year, and worked its way up form the mound of paper I have on my desk. It was a nice surprise to see it.
Re: a comment on The Virgin by cleverdevice	24-May-04/8:01 AM
Its inspired by a friends painting he did for for his art exam, but I know what you mean.
Re: In the berth by INTRANSIT	10-May-04/3:05 AM
Beautiful.
Re: a comment on Obituary for the Moon by wilco	10-May-04/3:04 AM
And 'please' wouldn't go amiss either, we barmen appreciate good manners you know. Not that I am a barman, I'm just imagining what a barman might say. I actually work in an expensive cookware shop.
Re: a comment on The Air That Escapes His Lungs. by cleverdevice	4-May-04/2:50 AM
Its a dying breath observation, come on, a little tiny-weeny bit of imagination might have got that?!
Re: The bearded space merchant from lil Idaho by Don-Quixote	28-Apr-04/2:58 AM
Nice idea, a little weaker towards the end, too much sentimentality for my taste, but a wonderful idea.
Re: a comment on The Song of Summer Youth (II) by cleverdevice	28-Apr-04/2:51 AM
Ah, but which finger shall you wear it upon?
Re: a comment on The Song of Summer Youth (II) by cleverdevice	26-Apr-04/2:18 AM
Yeah, it is somewhat cliched/crap.
Re: a comment on The Song of Summer Youth (II) by cleverdevice	21-Apr-04/2:57 AM
sorted, now.
Re: This Stinks by smarmyfaurt	19-Apr-04/2:26 AM
Yup, crotch-grabbingly bad.
Re: a comment on Shark by cleverdevice	22-Mar-04/7:27 AM
18 next April, but check out some of my other work for maturity.
Re: a comment on Upon the Battlefield by cleverdevice	25-Feb-04/4:20 AM
Like I tried to say before, my dear man, I am not guilty, just belatedly telling everyone that the first stanza is not mine. And revelling in one single -10-? Please, tell me, Sir, where did I give you that expression. My jodphurs are staying firmly up with a Thomas Pink, Germyn Street, belt. (Except for some devient scullery maid, the minx!)
Re: a comment on Upon the Battlefield by cleverdevice	24-Feb-04/4:05 AM
I never intended to pass all this poem off as my own, hence the admission (I wasn't exactly ridden with guilt, shaking and sweating fearing God's wrath). Just because I didn't chose to use quotation marks doesn't mean its plagiarism all of a sudden. To plagiarise:'' to use another person's idea or a part of their work and pretend that it is your own'', freeserve online dictionary, ''to take and use as one's own, the thoughts, writings or inventions of another'' - Shorter Oxford English Dictionary, ''to take ideas writings, etc. from another and pass them off as one's own'' - Collins Concise English Dictionary. Now how does that relate to this phrase quoted from above? '' the first stanza is not mine...I cannot take credit for it''. I have not, do not and will not take credit for the first stanza, so how can I be plagiarising when the definition is to pass off other's works as my own? Regardless of what punctuation devices are used in the body of the poem. Cock.