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Body Language (Haiku) by Ninoy_Instigator
I talk foul and slick. I respond suspiciously. What was really said?

Up the ladder: Torn...
Down the ladder: Damn you, Mary Poppins...

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5454545
Weighted score: 4.7727275
Overall Rank: 11368
Posted: October 21, 2002 3:22 PM PDT; Last modified: October 21, 2002 7:12 PM PDT
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[6] cleverdevice @ 212.219.142.161 | 22-Oct-02/5:38 AM | Reply
Good.
[8] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 22-Oct-02/6:55 AM | Reply
suspiciously strikes me as too soft-sounding a word, but i love the implications. very good.
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