Re: a comment on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~>	2-Dec-02/6:57 AM
hmm. you might be the biggest idiot yet to befoul these pages. i'll bet a million dollars you were drunk when you wrote this rant, but i'll also bet you were just as stupid when you woke up the next morning. try to reserve this kind of talk for your mom (talk about one-eyed, sperm-burping gutter sluts!). i know she enjoys it.
Re: Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT	27-Nov-02/8:45 AM
i want more from the last line. how about "while hitler sniffles," or "inside your stinkhole" or "like the Gestapo"?
Re: Thats one rockin' bacchanalian orgy. by ==Doylum	27-Nov-02/8:41 AM
nice. brilliant even. somehow, the only thing that would improve it for me is if you made her from a different country. chile doesn't have the loaded irony i want. 9
Re: a comment on two poles are better than one by <~>	27-Nov-02/8:39 AM
better, but i still think the rest is stronger than the end. i'm sorry i can't be more specific. i'll try to explain it over a cold beer and a warm corpse sometime.
Re: a comment on two poles are better than one by <~>	26-Nov-02/1:04 PM
i think it was me influenced by your heritage
Re: a comment on two poles are better than one by <~>	26-Nov-02/12:59 PM
the first part is angry, but it's more of a controlled anger, like that released on Poland back in '39. it weakens with the line "it won't be stopped." something about the timing of the rest is thrown off by this line and it doesn't fully recover (in my opinion).
Re: November's Pot Marigolds, Still Blooming by <~>	26-Nov-02/12:48 PM
i have an Alusian named Calendula! 8 swastikas!
Re: two poles are better than one by <~>	26-Nov-02/12:46 PM
this is amazing...until the last two stanzas. i think your ire got the better of you and you let the words get away from you a little. knowing you, you probably did it on purpose and i'm missing the point.
Re: a comment on The Sea by Moss	20-Nov-02/9:02 AM
although, reading it again, i see that there's more than i thought the first time. now i feel like it's a poem that is awash in patricia highsmith imagery, and it's starting to sink in.
Re: a comment on The Sea by Moss	20-Nov-02/9:00 AM
readint too deeply into is is going to bore me. can you enlighten me?
Re: The Sea by Moss	20-Nov-02/8:56 AM
i hate to dissent, but if i have to read one more goddamn poem about the sea, i might have to kill a kitten on my way home from rehab tonight.
Re: In the heart there is freedom by mozac	20-Nov-02/8:54 AM
this reminds me of the answer to the question no one asked.
Re: a comment on Where Is Happiness by BUFFY0BSESSED	20-Nov-02/8:51 AM
as usual, struck dead by the snapping tail of god.
Re: "Why would I need to get in touch with you?" by Limness	20-Nov-02/8:44 AM
i give this one two swastikas up! lovely work. 9
Re: a comment on Haiku Gymraeg by Nicholas Jones	19-Nov-02/10:50 AM
i was in a bad mood when i wrote those comments. sorry for any offense. the bottom line, as i was trying to assert somehow, is that to convey anything (art, as you call it) you should at least pretend to want to, as a starter. unless the readers speak welsh, or are as culturally enlightened as Settle, your message won't come across. it is interesting, but
Re: a comment on Haiku Gymraeg by Nicholas Jones	19-Nov-02/10:44 AM
spoken like a true jackoff. and this: THE PROPER MEANING OF A WORD IS INSIGNIFICANT TO ME MOST OF THE TIME, might be the most pretentious thing i've ever heard. love, a complete fuckwit.
Re: yellow verse by daniella	19-Nov-02/6:51 AM
yes...at last...
Re: a comment on Faith... by loneshadow29	19-Nov-02/6:43 AM
oh, settle! you're such a wiggly little snake!
Re: Haiku Gymraeg by Nicholas Jones	19-Nov-02/6:38 AM
what the fuck is this shit? is someone taking a class in gaelic (is that what this is?) and writing poems from the dictionary? is poetry supposed to convey something to the reader? know why i'm asking?
Re: a comment on the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain by kiki	14-Nov-02/8:54 AM
you know what i meant. don't make me squeeze my legs together to collect the drippings.