replying on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~>
2 Dec 2002, 6:57 AM
hmm. you might be the biggest idiot yet to befoul these pages. i'll bet a million dollars you were drunk when you wrote this rant, but i'll also bet you were just as stupid when you woke up the next morning. try to reserve this kind of talk for your mom (talk about one-eyed, sperm-burping gutter sluts!). i know she enjoys it.
on Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT
27 Nov 2002, 8:45 AM
i want more from the last line. how about "while hitler sniffles," or "inside your stinkhole" or "like the Gestapo"?
on Thats one rockin' bacchanalian orgy. by ==Doylum
27 Nov 2002, 8:41 AM
nice. brilliant even. somehow, the only thing that would improve it for me is if you made her from a different country. chile doesn't have the loaded irony i want. 9
replying on two poles are better than one by <~>
27 Nov 2002, 8:39 AM
better, but i still think the rest is stronger than the end. i'm sorry i can't be more specific. i'll try to explain it over a cold beer and a warm corpse sometime.
replying on two poles are better than one by <~>
26 Nov 2002, 1:04 PM
i think it was me influenced by your heritage
replying on two poles are better than one by <~>
26 Nov 2002, 12:59 PM
the first part is angry, but it's more of a controlled anger, like that released on Poland back in '39. it weakens with the line "it won't be stopped." something about the timing of the rest is thrown off by this line and it doesn't fully recover (in my opinion).
on November's Pot Marigolds, Still Blooming by <~>
26 Nov 2002, 12:48 PM
i have an Alusian named Calendula! 8 swastikas!
on two poles are better than one by <~>
26 Nov 2002, 12:46 PM
this is amazing...until the last two stanzas. i think your ire got the better of you and you let the words get away from you a little. knowing you, you probably did it on purpose and i'm missing the point.
on In the heart there is freedom by mozac
20 Nov 2002, 8:54 AM
this reminds me of the answer to the question no one asked.
replying on Where Is Happiness by BUFFY0BSESSED
20 Nov 2002, 8:51 AM
as usual, struck dead by the snapping tail of god.
on "Why would I need to get in touch with you?" by Limness
20 Nov 2002, 8:44 AM
i give this one two swastikas up! lovely work. 9
replying on Haiku Gymraeg by Nicholas Jones
19 Nov 2002, 10:50 AM
i was in a bad mood when i wrote those comments. sorry for any offense. the bottom line, as i was trying to assert somehow, is that to convey anything (art, as you call it) you should at least pretend to want to, as a starter. unless the readers speak welsh, or are as culturally enlightened as Settle, your message won't come across. it is interesting, but
replying on Haiku Gymraeg by Nicholas Jones
19 Nov 2002, 10:44 AM
spoken like a true jackoff. and this: THE PROPER MEANING OF A WORD IS INSIGNIFICANT TO ME MOST OF THE TIME, might be the most pretentious thing i've ever heard. love, a complete fuckwit.
on yellow verse by daniella
19 Nov 2002, 6:51 AM
yes...at last...
replying on Faith... by loneshadow29
19 Nov 2002, 6:43 AM
oh, settle! you're such a wiggly little snake!
on Haiku Gymraeg by Nicholas Jones
19 Nov 2002, 6:38 AM
what the fuck is this shit? is someone taking a class in gaelic (is that what this is?) and writing poems from the dictionary? is poetry supposed to convey something to the reader? know why i'm asking?
replying on the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain by kiki
14 Nov 2002, 8:54 AM
you know what i meant. don't make me squeeze my legs together to collect the drippings.