| Re: ex mas by flatliner |
12-Dec-02/11:29 AM |
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something strangely enduring about this piece of donkey spittle. keep it up or
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| Re: A hard life by INTRANSIT |
12-Dec-02/11:27 AM |
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i don't think you could mean "auger." it's a noun, the tool, not the act. you might mean "augur," but that doesn't make much sense either.
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| Re: a comment on A hard life by INTRANSIT |
12-Dec-02/11:26 AM |
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amusing or not, you're quoting the title incorrectly.
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| Re: a comment on Danse by Limness |
12-Dec-02/11:22 AM |
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i disagree with GW (george washington). to start a poem with "in another poem i'll tell you" and then go ahead and tell of those things anyhow is very effective. like the compulsion overtakes any poetic restraint or intention of poetic restraint. i would like the first stanza to be a bit longer and would be happy enough if the whole thing ended at "everything." top-shelf effort, limness, as you call yourself.
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| Re: a comment on Walter Cronkite by UnityMitford |
12-Dec-02/10:51 AM |
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precisely. don't you think landmines would do the trick nicely?
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| Re: a comment on Walter Cronkite by UnityMitford |
10-Dec-02/9:05 AM |
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that's ok, david. we're getting used to it. his group, as named below, has an adopt-an-animal campaign for overseas vagabonds. their not pets, though, they adopt them for dinner.
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| Re: a comment on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~> |
9-Dec-02/11:32 AM |
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shit! it looks like i directed this at you, zzin, when it was really a response to some asshole whose comment has been deleted. just so you know.
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| Re: Panning for gold by INTRANSIT |
9-Dec-02/11:24 AM |
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nifty poem. nice image, at the end there. i'd change the name though. maybe "panning for dildos"? 8 swastikas!
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| Re: And uncle sam says... by INTRANSIT |
9-Dec-02/11:21 AM |
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that's it, take a stand against both sides! now you're getting somewhere. 4 swastikas!
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| Re: sex by Limness |
9-Dec-02/10:58 AM |
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this brings me down. depressing and wonderful, like the end of something. 9 swastikas!
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| Re: a comment on Beliefs? by RWAndersen |
9-Dec-02/9:19 AM |
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i agree with it, but so? and i hate the title. 6 swastikas!
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| Re: a comment on Soap Star Stud Haikus by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
9-Dec-02/9:15 AM |
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actually, the third one should go last.
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| Re: Soap Star Stud Haikus by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
9-Dec-02/9:14 AM |
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this is way too perfect! the first one is the best (for me) and so i'd like it to come last. great stuff. 9 swastikas!
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| Re: Dinner Menu by A. Nomaly |
9-Dec-02/9:08 AM |
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i don't know what it is, but i really like this. i truly hate lamb, though, but i'll have to get over it. you should change your user name before someone tracks you down and does things to you for your cleverness. 8 swastikas!
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| Re: Untitled by ==Doylum |
9-Dec-02/9:03 AM |
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they must not be for me either, as i have no idea what a nork is. because of that, print this page and roll it up and bury it in your little brown winker.
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| Re: Missing the In-Between by <~> |
9-Dec-02/8:55 AM |
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nice. this brings you back to your poems of yore. the ones that make me want to drink scotch in a big naughty chair by the window. "unbroken" might be my favorite word. very nice work. 9 swastikas!
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| Re: a comment on want of warmth by <~> |
5-Dec-02/8:57 AM |
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i like 'em young. real young, if you know what i'm saying. 9 swastikas for the young women! (sorry, the snow is making me stir crazy)
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| Re: a comment on want of warmth by <~> |
5-Dec-02/8:55 AM |
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is this about you losing a guy to an older woman? i like it, although i don't like old women, sexually, that is. 8 swastikas!
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| Re: peer pressure leads to awful outcomes by joey |
3-Dec-02/1:10 PM |
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drugs, schmugs. excuse me while i go shoot up.
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| Re: ODE TO NICHOLAS JONES III by lukehanney |
2-Dec-02/7:01 AM |
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