on ex mas by flatliner
12 Dec 2002, 11:29 AM
something strangely enduring about this piece of donkey spittle. keep it up or
on A hard life by INTRANSIT
12 Dec 2002, 11:27 AM
i don't think you could mean "auger." it's a noun, the tool, not the act. you might mean "augur," but that doesn't make much sense either.
replying on A hard life by INTRANSIT
12 Dec 2002, 11:26 AM
amusing or not, you're quoting the title incorrectly.
i disagree with GW (george washington). to start a poem with "in another poem i'll tell you" and then go ahead and tell of those things anyhow is very effective. like the compulsion overtakes any poetic restraint or intention of poetic restraint. i would like the first stanza to be a bit longer and would be happy enough if the whole thing ended at "everything." top-shelf effort, limness, as you call yourself.
replying on Walter Cronkite by UnityMitford
12 Dec 2002, 10:51 AM
precisely. don't you think landmines would do the trick nicely?
replying on Walter Cronkite by UnityMitford
10 Dec 2002, 9:05 AM
that's ok, david. we're getting used to it. his group, as named below, has an adopt-an-animal campaign for overseas vagabonds. their not pets, though, they adopt them for dinner.
replying on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~>
9 Dec 2002, 11:32 AM
shit! it looks like i directed this at you, zzin, when it was really a response to some asshole whose comment has been deleted. just so you know.
on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT
9 Dec 2002, 11:24 AM
nifty poem. nice image, at the end there. i'd change the name though. maybe "panning for dildos"? 8 swastikas!
on And uncle sam says... by INTRANSIT
9 Dec 2002, 11:21 AM
that's it, take a stand against both sides! now you're getting somewhere. 4 swastikas!
replying on Beliefs? by RWAndersen
9 Dec 2002, 9:19 AM
i agree with it, but so? and i hate the title. 6 swastikas!
replying on Soap Star Stud Haikus by <{Baba^Yaga}>
9 Dec 2002, 9:15 AM
actually, the third one should go last.
on Soap Star Stud Haikus by <{Baba^Yaga}>
9 Dec 2002, 9:14 AM
this is way too perfect! the first one is the best (for me) and so i'd like it to come last. great stuff. 9 swastikas!
on Dinner Menu by A. Nomaly
9 Dec 2002, 9:08 AM
i don't know what it is, but i really like this. i truly hate lamb, though, but i'll have to get over it. you should change your user name before someone tracks you down and does things to you for your cleverness. 8 swastikas!
on Missing the In-Between by <~>
9 Dec 2002, 8:55 AM
nice. this brings you back to your poems of yore. the ones that make me want to drink scotch in a big naughty chair by the window. "unbroken" might be my favorite word. very nice work. 9 swastikas!
replying on want of warmth by <~>
5 Dec 2002, 8:57 AM
i like 'em young. real young, if you know what i'm saying. 9 swastikas for the young women! (sorry, the snow is making me stir crazy)
replying on want of warmth by <~>
5 Dec 2002, 8:55 AM
is this about you losing a guy to an older woman? i like it, although i don't like old women, sexually, that is. 8 swastikas!
on peer pressure leads to awful outcomes by joey
3 Dec 2002, 1:10 PM
drugs, schmugs. excuse me while i go shoot up.
on ODE TO NICHOLAS JONES III by lukehanney
2 Dec 2002, 7:01 AM
top shelf! 8 swastikas!