| Re: ex mas by flatliner |
12-Dec-02/11:29 AM |
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something strangely enduring about this piece of donkey spittle. keep it up or
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| Re: Corny. by Plasticgirlwithgun |
13-Dec-02/9:17 AM |
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if you put "pierced" in parentheses after "balls," it could really do something for me and my unpierced septum. i, personally, like guys and girls with pierced sternums. that is HOT!
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13-Dec-02/9:22 AM |
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nice. is the title a reference to faulkner, joe christmas, and the gang?
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16-Dec-02/9:30 AM |
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16-Dec-02/9:31 AM |
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16-Dec-02/9:33 AM |
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jesus walks into an inn, puts 3 nails on the counter and says to the innkeeper "can you put me up for the night?"
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| Re: Icarus Down by horus8 |
16-Dec-02/9:39 AM |
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this is nice, really nice.
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| Re: Icarus Down by horus8 |
16-Dec-02/9:40 AM |
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how come so much of your stuff is such inane dogshit? this one almost makes up for (some of) it.
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18-Dec-02/7:33 AM |
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me likey drinky and write bad poetry. ugh.
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| Re: untitled#3 by darby pyn |
19-Dec-02/7:39 AM |
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the thing that distracts me right off the bat is the apostrophe in "eyes" that should be there. not to mention the "your" that should be "you're." this has a nice flow. i have no idea what it's saying, but i don't really care either because of the way it moves. 8 swastikas!
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| Re: not even soup by <~> |
13-Jan-03/7:01 AM |
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very nice. no soup for you! but there is, actually. 9 swastikas!
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16-Jan-03/1:03 PM |
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oh, this makes my bones ache. very nice. 9 swastikas!
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| Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
31-Jan-03/9:19 AM |
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while this laid it all out nicely, i would have liked to see some parody of the pimple poem in the construct of this one. i want it meaner, i want it to point fingers at the guilty, naming names, naming poems...(but leave poor Katie out of it).
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28-Feb-03/6:23 AM |
honestly, i don't know what this means, but it says it in a way that pleases my soul. (i should say, i have an idea, but...)
9 swastikas!
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| Re: Ten new questions from Dan Rather by horus8 |
28-Feb-03/6:30 AM |
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holy shit, that says it all or comes damn close. also "do you fuck your doubles in the undisclosed location you sometimes shares with dick cheney?"
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| Re: On coming across a field of deer one afternoon by <~> |
28-Feb-03/6:33 AM |
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as usual, gorgeousness and gorgeosity made flesh.
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28-Feb-03/11:19 AM |
i remember this one time when i jumped this guy for being gay and i held his wrist and kept making him smack himself with his fist, saying "stop hitting yourself. stop hitting yourself!" until, finally, i got bored and went on to the truck pull and drank lots of miller beer.
that aside, your anger detracts from any thoughtful poetry. rage on. 7 swastikas!
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| Re: footprint of the american chicken by bondjedi |
20-Mar-03/6:55 AM |
guns are the least of your problems if you're in iraq right now. otherwise, i think you'll be ok. are you in high school, by the way? this has all the subtley and eloquence of what one might write in the 9th grade.
Duck and Cover! 1 swastika for you, hippie! Peace is for Pussies!
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20-Mar-03/8:03 AM |
see? hitler was quite kind. all the bad things people say about the poor guy...
8 swastikas for you!
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20-Mar-03/8:05 AM |
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methinks you enjoyed this a little too much. it makes me groan and choke. 6 swatikas!
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