on some deleted poem
9 Dec 2002, 9:01 AM
who's ron weasley, that little red-headed dyke from the movies?! if so...7 swastikas! (i hate that little bastard)
on ODE TO NICHOLAS JONES III by lukehanney
2 Dec 2002, 7:01 AM
top shelf! 8 swastikas!
on A hard life by INTRANSIT
12 Dec 2002, 11:27 AM
i don't think you could mean "auger." it's a noun, the tool, not the act. you might mean "augur," but that doesn't make much sense either.
on Dinner Menu by A. Nomaly
9 Dec 2002, 9:08 AM
i don't know what it is, but i really like this. i truly hate lamb, though, but i'll have to get over it. you should change your user name before someone tracks you down and does things to you for your cleverness. 8 swastikas!
on some deleted poem
9 Dec 2002, 8:58 AM
very Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds. is that a good thing? could be worse. 6 swastikas!
on Soap Star Stud Haikus by <{Baba^Yaga}>
9 Dec 2002, 9:14 AM
this is way too perfect! the first one is the best (for me) and so i'd like it to come last. great stuff. 9 swastikas!
on And uncle sam says... by INTRANSIT
9 Dec 2002, 11:21 AM
that's it, take a stand against both sides! now you're getting somewhere. 4 swastikas!
on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT
9 Dec 2002, 11:24 AM
nifty poem. nice image, at the end there. i'd change the name though. maybe "panning for dildos"? 8 swastikas!
on Missing the In-Between by <~>
9 Dec 2002, 8:55 AM
nice. this brings you back to your poems of yore. the ones that make me want to drink scotch in a big naughty chair by the window. "unbroken" might be my favorite word. very nice work. 9 swastikas!
on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2002, 8:38 AM
seig heil! 7 swastikas!
on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2002, 9:02 AM
this is magical, like that time i made them clear my lawn with their teeth. 9 swastikas! (it'd be 10, but i want a stronger word where "know" is)
on peer pressure leads to awful outcomes by joey
3 Dec 2002, 1:10 PM
drugs, schmugs. excuse me while i go shoot up.
on some deleted poem
2 Dec 2002, 12:25 PM
reads a little like a beat poem that should be spoken aloud. nice and cynical. 7 swastikas!
on some deleted poem
2 Dec 2002, 7:02 AM
that bleach really seems to have inspired you. maybe you should try kerosene next time. i bet that would really get things going.
on Thats one rockin' bacchanalian orgy. by ==Doylum
27 Nov 2002, 8:41 AM
nice. brilliant even. somehow, the only thing that would improve it for me is if you made her from a different country. chile doesn't have the loaded irony i want. 9
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 12:53 PM
what the hell are soulless goats? are you taking cheapshots at arabs again? as for the rest, i like the last stanza quite a bit, although "scary things" is a little weak. 6 swastikas!
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 12:56 PM
still other times it seems like you might have dropped it on the floor before you ever did much with it. so goes it for this bit of metapoetry. 4 swastikas :(
on Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT
27 Nov 2002, 8:45 AM
i want more from the last line. how about "while hitler sniffles," or "inside your stinkhole" or "like the Gestapo"?