on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 9:31 AM
an oldie but goodie
on footprint of the american chicken by bondjedi
20 Mar 2003, 6:55 AM
guns are the least of your problems if you're in iraq right now. otherwise, i think you'll be ok. are you in high school, by the way? this has all the subtley and eloquence of what one might write in the 9th grade.
Duck and Cover! 1 swastika for you, hippie! Peace is for Pussies!
Duck and Cover! 1 swastika for you, hippie! Peace is for Pussies!
on some deleted poem
20 Mar 2003, 8:03 AM
see? hitler was quite kind. all the bad things people say about the poor guy...
8 swastikas for you!
8 swastikas for you!
on some deleted poem
20 Mar 2003, 8:05 AM
methinks you enjoyed this a little too much. it makes me groan and choke. 6 swatikas!
on Ten new questions from Dan Rather by horus8
28 Feb 2003, 6:30 AM
holy shit, that says it all or comes damn close. also "do you fuck your doubles in the undisclosed location you sometimes shares with dick cheney?"
on some deleted poem
28 Feb 2003, 11:19 AM
i remember this one time when i jumped this guy for being gay and i held his wrist and kept making him smack himself with his fist, saying "stop hitting yourself. stop hitting yourself!" until, finally, i got bored and went on to the truck pull and drank lots of miller beer.
that aside, your anger detracts from any thoughtful poetry. rage on. 7 swastikas!
that aside, your anger detracts from any thoughtful poetry. rage on. 7 swastikas!
on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
31 Jan 2003, 9:19 AM
while this laid it all out nicely, i would have liked to see some parody of the pimple poem in the construct of this one. i want it meaner, i want it to point fingers at the guilty, naming names, naming poems...(but leave poor Katie out of it).
on not even soup by <~>
13 Jan 2003, 7:01 AM
very nice. no soup for you! but there is, actually. 9 swastikas!
on untitled#3 by darby pyn
19 Dec 2002, 7:39 AM
the thing that distracts me right off the bat is the apostrophe in "eyes" that should be there. not to mention the "your" that should be "you're." this has a nice flow. i have no idea what it's saying, but i don't really care either because of the way it moves. 8 swastikas!
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 9:33 AM
jesus walks into an inn, puts 3 nails on the counter and says to the innkeeper "can you put me up for the night?"
on Corny. by Plasticgirlwithgun
13 Dec 2002, 9:17 AM
if you put "pierced" in parentheses after "balls," it could really do something for me and my unpierced septum. i, personally, like guys and girls with pierced sternums. that is HOT!
on some deleted poem
28 Feb 2003, 6:23 AM
honestly, i don't know what this means, but it says it in a way that pleases my soul. (i should say, i have an idea, but...)
9 swastikas!
9 swastikas!
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 1:03 PM
oh, this makes my bones ache. very nice. 9 swastikas!
on some deleted poem
13 Dec 2002, 9:22 AM
nice. is the title a reference to faulkner, joe christmas, and the gang?
on some deleted poem
16 Dec 2002, 9:30 AM
um, yeah.
on On coming across a field of deer one afternoon by <~>
28 Feb 2003, 6:33 AM
as usual, gorgeousness and gorgeosity made flesh.
on Icarus Down by horus8
16 Dec 2002, 9:40 AM
how come so much of your stuff is such inane dogshit? this one almost makes up for (some of) it.
on some deleted poem
18 Dec 2002, 7:33 AM
me likey drinky and write bad poetry. ugh.
on Icarus Down by horus8
16 Dec 2002, 9:39 AM
this is nice, really nice.