Re: Ode to the unwanted chip by deadstar	14-Nov-02/8:25 AM
oh, lord.
Re: The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus	14-Nov-02/8:17 AM
if i were Dannara, i wouldn't know how the hell to take this (not that i do anyway).
Re: a comment on the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain by kiki	14-Nov-02/8:03 AM
don't be rude, or i'll spill my frothy beer in your lap!
Re: Mendacity by kiki	14-Nov-02/7:51 AM
i can't quite place this style. it's somewhere between jim morrison (yuk) and the surrealists (slightly less horrible). so impersonal, though, that's it's hard to connect with. reminds me of snorting ritalin and talking in circles and writing it down. those were the days.
Re: a comment on morning by kiki	14-Nov-02/7:45 AM
this is all fascinating.
Re: the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain by kiki	14-Nov-02/7:41 AM
i hate to say it (after all the other comments), but i like this poem. it's a little "exquisite corpse" and cold around the edges, but in its scatterbrained way, it's effective.
Re: a comment on Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8	6-Nov-02/8:50 AM
note the time.
Re: a comment on Hells Game by Katie	6-Nov-02/8:39 AM
i know i am.
Re: Drinker's Haikus 2a and 2b by cacophony	5-Nov-02/11:46 AM
i say once you hit 30, you're too old to drink that shit and should move on to scotch. sounds like your stomach's telling you the same thing. nice. 8
Re: Hells Game by Katie	5-Nov-02/11:31 AM
katie, in those same lines, you have two more "where"s to change to "were"s.
Re: a comment on untitled2 by PunchMeInTheFace	5-Nov-02/7:34 AM
you should shave your own moustache. it smells like beer.
Re: a comment on untitled2 by PunchMeInTheFace	5-Nov-02/7:25 AM
you're such a picky old biddy! about the poet though, best username ever.
Re: a comment on Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8	5-Nov-02/7:18 AM
you're one to talk!
Re: a comment on Wearing Black, as Memory Dictates by UnityMitford	5-Nov-02/7:14 AM
it's about Hitler. does that help?
Re: The Gunfighter by deadstar	5-Nov-02/7:13 AM
if you've never seen the film "The Gunfighter," you should, then revisit this poem. nothing wrong with the poem, but it could be a little tighter.
Re: a comment on Hells Game by Katie	5-Nov-02/7:10 AM
you're welcome, slim.
Re: Hells Game by Katie	5-Nov-02/6:55 AM
katie's back! there is some nice stuff in here. in the two "You thought you..." lines, you'll want to change the "where"s to "were"s. i like those lines, though. the poem veers from subtle to not so subtle, but it's one of your more solid poems (although what do i know).
Re: Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8	5-Nov-02/6:49 AM
what happened to old Gay Angel, anyhow? he hasn't been around. and i thought he said one time that he lived in Indiana.
Re: a comment on Wearing Black, as Memory Dictates by UnityMitford	4-Nov-02/1:50 PM
i'll think about it. although, why you'd want to strip the scent is beyond me.
Re: a comment on bad boy taylor by rosiebailey	4-Nov-02/1:48 PM
both of you, quiet! save your strength.