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Mendacity (Free verse) by kiki Lies surface in the noses of old women,
the blistered veins of angered daisies,
wheels of infants, infants lovers,
the hollowed tubes of signage and colons.
Yet they continue
to walk about this place in pairs.
As if the sky were yellow.
As if the mind is safe.
Up the ladder:
Little wishing well
Down the ladder:
Hold Tight
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Posted: October 28, 2002 7:19 PM PST; Last modified: October 28, 2002 7:19 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8569565 Overall Rank: 10457 Comments:
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28-Oct-02/7:34 PM
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not kiki freve, by chance?
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kiki @ 24.61.133.29
> <~>
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30-Oct-02/4:20 PM
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no, kikiriki.
kiki this is really good well done :)
i can't quite place this style. it's somewhere between jim morrison (yuk) and the surrealists (slightly less horrible). so impersonal, though, that's it's hard to connect with. reminds me of snorting ritalin and talking in circles and writing it down. those were the days.
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