Re: Darkness by The_Shadows_Smile	13-Oct-02/3:02 PM
i liked it
Re: To Kiss by Jody Conn	19-Oct-02/5:18 AM
i loved it
Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	28-Oct-02/4:29 AM
well,i always thought it's awfull to diss others poetry but honestly i think poetry isn't ur thing,try something else
Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	28-Oct-02/5:01 AM
go and die,have some mercy on me for god sake
Re: Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore	28-Oct-02/7:15 AM
this is a good poetry
Re: other by ThreeFourSix	28-Oct-02/7:27 AM
unusaul example
Re: My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	28-Oct-02/7:42 AM
the last stanza is way impressive
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Oct-02/7:57 AM
vey creative
Re: Thoughtless Deed by craiggiarc1971	4-Nov-02/7:28 AM
i give it a 6,still need to improve i guess but it's a good work though
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Nov-02/7:36 AM
incredibaly bright,best wishes
Re: ~*Broken Soul*~ by Katie	4-Nov-02/7:42 AM
i wish i can write like u,!
Re: A Gift of Beauty... by loneshadow29	4-Nov-02/7:49 AM
very sensitive
Re: Little Miss Muff by Spider-Man	12-Mar-03/7:23 AM
Spider Man, is it the comic or the tv show!!!!
Re: Februarys mother by INTRANSIT	12-Mar-03/7:25 AM
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Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig	11-Apr-03/3:57 PM
the last 3 stanzas are realy what makes this poem,and i liked using the (I remember) at the begining of a new line.i give it 7
Re: Family Portrait by Mr Pig	11-Apr-03/4:07 PM
"Mum would find company in loneliness" "Everything looks perfect in a Silver frame" "The King of bastard pawns ashamed of his crown" i liked these most of all,each one made a vision itself.i give this 9
Re: Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig	11-Apr-03/4:19 PM
i loved the way that you seem to ask her something(if i touch you,could i be enlightened) but matter of fact is you are more of asking your self,i liked the way you are trying to kill the ghost of you father who is trying to keep you away of the light you are searching for. "there is no shame in holding myself" this sounds like you are tring to convince yourself.i give it 10,awesome work.
Re: Februarys mother by INTRANSIT	11-Apr-03/4:33 PM
something about it touches me alhtough i can't really tell whut.
Re: Dance With Me by marvelis	11-Apr-03/4:58 PM
this is one nice romantic poem and by the way you don't need to concentrate much on the rhyming of the poem,many of good poems don't rhyme,modern poetry doens't stand on rhyming so just feel like fre to write don't limit yourself with a usuage of words. i give this 6,pretty good work
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Apr-03/6:14 AM
i liked it.