on some deleted poem
28 Sep 2002, 4:26 PM
it's cool,and the best about this poem is the ryhming thing.
on RunOnSentence by harrytuttle
29 Sep 2002, 4:56 PM
it's a nice one
on some deleted poem
5 Oct 2002, 5:19 AM
nice trick
on A Well Worth Wait by savannah
29 Sep 2002, 5:35 AM
it's a good poem but there are alot of repeated words,like forever,friendship..etc!
on School (a sonnet) by Nicholas Jones
29 Sep 2002, 5:47 AM
i liked this one so much,expecially the last stanza and i liked that one too " they burnt our dreams"
it's awesome,keep up the good work.
it's awesome,keep up the good work.
on MY LOVE FOR YOU by Normo
29 Sep 2002, 5:22 AM
it's good but it's more like a song than a poem,it has a good rhyming
on Poem 479 by Nicholas Jones
29 Sep 2002, 5:32 AM
i liked the first part most of all
on City Streets by greym0on
29 Sep 2002, 5:01 PM
this poem is gr8,it has that magic
on some deleted poem
28 Sep 2002, 4:35 PM
this poem is awesome,there's alot of potential in the words as it mix between the imagination and magic in the way of lookin at things.
on untitled by ThreeFourSix
29 Sep 2002, 5:38 AM
it's a bit mysterious but it's a good poem,i liked that stanza "feelings strong and truths will dare".