regarding some deleted poem...	28-Sep-02/4:26 PM
it's cool,and the best about this poem is the ryhming thing.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Sep-02/4:35 PM
this poem is awesome,there's alot of potential in the words as it mix between the imagination and magic in the way of lookin at things.
Re: MY LOVE FOR YOU by Normo	29-Sep-02/5:22 AM
it's good but it's more like a song than a poem,it has a good rhyming
Re: Gemini by susie	29-Sep-02/5:25 AM
i liked this alot,i'm a gemini too,but there's a true feeling besides it' s a creative idea to write about
Re: Poem 479 by Nicholas Jones	29-Sep-02/5:32 AM
i liked the first part most of all
Re: A Well Worth Wait by savannah	29-Sep-02/5:35 AM
it's a good poem but there are alot of repeated words,like forever,friendship..etc!
Re: untitled by ThreeFourSix	29-Sep-02/5:38 AM
it's a bit mysterious but it's a good poem,i liked that stanza "feelings strong and truths will dare".
Re: Thunder by Normo	29-Sep-02/5:40 AM
it's smart to express self-emptiness by describing the crowd outside
Re: School (a sonnet) by Nicholas Jones	29-Sep-02/5:47 AM
i liked this one so much,expecially the last stanza and i liked that one too " they burnt our dreams" it's awesome,keep up the good work.
Re: RunOnSentence by harrytuttle	29-Sep-02/4:56 PM
it's a nice one
Re: City Streets by greym0on	29-Sep-02/5:01 PM
this poem is gr8,it has that magic
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Oct-02/5:19 AM
nice trick