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6-Nov-03/4:23 PM |
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The you I want to see has wrinkled jeans on the floor, and your bed is not made. (It'd be kinda lumpy with me in it!)
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6-Nov-03/4:25 PM |
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Like the Marines say, "Pain is just weakness leaving the body" But you know, what doesn't kill you makes you stronger.
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| Re: Memory by SILYLILGURL |
6-Nov-03/4:30 PM |
Sometimes memories are the hardest part of living huh?
I refer you to my latest poem, On Visiting My Father.
I shall bestow a 10 on this li'l ditty to balance Dreamers unmerited 0
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| Re: The Maguswolf by SupremeDreamer |
6-Nov-03/4:34 PM |
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Very vivid, I really enjoyed this one. Have you read my latest? I anxiously await your input.(as long as yer nice.)
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| Re: Pot Haikus (Ode to Stoners) by Shardik |
6-Nov-03/4:35 PM |
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I like the second one. I was that stoned once--along time ago of course.
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| Re: It was... by Shardik |
6-Nov-03/4:38 PM |
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Something is wrong with both you and your friend. French Fries anyone?
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| Re: unsung love by khuscen |
6-Nov-03/4:41 PM |
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I've has women drive me away with that piercing glare. Makes me shiver.
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| Re: Gods Musician: Grave Digger by SupremeDreamer |
6-Nov-03/4:43 PM |
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Wow, I need to read more of your stuff, This is Excellent.
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| Re: Thoughts by tori |
6-Nov-03/5:38 PM |
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In a way, yes I guess. My thoughts must have syrup on them. they seem to stick with me for a while. Kinda like dreams. They stick eith me 'till they are fulfilled.[I have alot of dreams still with me].
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| Re: What Do You Do? by tori |
6-Nov-03/5:46 PM |
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I've been in love like that once, when I was 17 or so. I had to let her go. The poem I wrote her is on this site, click my name and read Dear Love, That's my version.
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| Re: Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT |
6-Nov-03/5:49 PM |
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A souped up hemi hearse? Sweet. I know where there's a '48 pontiac silverstreak hearse just begging to be restored{Not to change the subject}
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| Re: Sorry by tori |
6-Nov-03/5:52 PM |
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Yea, I just lost my dad in May, But I was able to be there with him, and I think we were o.k. I still wish it hadn't been so sudden, there were alot of things left unsaid.
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6-Nov-03/5:54 PM |
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Such low votes, here-let me help
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| Re: My Reason For Love by Miggy |
6-Nov-03/6:00 PM |
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Young love is probably more important to the formation of who you will be than anything else. This too, keep writing.
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| Re: :) by Moniquesuvee |
6-Nov-03/6:06 PM |
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| Re: Behind My Blue Eyes (rough draft) by Mona Lisa |
9-Nov-03/9:29 AM |
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Is there anyone besides me who can do that? I doubt it.
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| Re: The Burial by Mona Lisa |
9-Nov-03/9:31 AM |
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I like it, the darkness of it seems to touch my soul somehow.10
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| Re: Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer |
9-Nov-03/9:38 AM |
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Somewhere on that beach there are spoilt peaches. Good job, A nice addition to all our lost father poems. I shall return the ten you gave me.
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| Re: an early discovery (reworking) by richa |
9-Nov-03/9:42 AM |
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| Re: I'll Take You In My Arms by ilovecars131 |
9-Nov-03/9:53 AM |
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Touching. BTW, I love cars too
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