on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2003, 4:23 PM
The you I want to see has wrinkled jeans on the floor, and your bed is not made. (It'd be kinda lumpy with me in it!)
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2003, 4:25 PM
Like the Marines say, "Pain is just weakness leaving the body" But you know, what doesn't kill you makes you stronger.
on The Maguswolf by SupremeDreamer
6 Nov 2003, 4:34 PM
Very vivid, I really enjoyed this one. Have you read my latest? I anxiously await your input.(as long as yer nice.)
on Pot Haikus (Ode to Stoners) by Shardik
6 Nov 2003, 4:35 PM
I like the second one. I was that stoned once--along time ago of course.
on unsung love by khuscen
6 Nov 2003, 4:41 PM
I've has women drive me away with that piercing glare. Makes me shiver.
on Gods Musician: Grave Digger by SupremeDreamer
6 Nov 2003, 4:43 PM
Wow, I need to read more of your stuff, This is Excellent.
on What Do You Do? by tori
6 Nov 2003, 5:46 PM
I've been in love like that once, when I was 17 or so. I had to let her go. The poem I wrote her is on this site, click my name and read Dear Love, That's my version.
on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT
6 Nov 2003, 5:49 PM
A souped up hemi hearse? Sweet. I know where there's a '48 pontiac silverstreak hearse just begging to be restored{Not to change the subject}
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2003, 5:54 PM
Such low votes, here-let me help
on My Reason For Love by Miggy
6 Nov 2003, 6:00 PM
Young love is probably more important to the formation of who you will be than anything else. This too, keep writing.
on :) by Moniquesuvee
6 Nov 2003, 6:06 PM
So, did you get him?
on Behind My Blue Eyes (rough draft) by Mona Lisa
9 Nov 2003, 9:29 AM
Is there anyone besides me who can do that? I doubt it.
on The Burial by Mona Lisa
9 Nov 2003, 9:31 AM
I like it, the darkness of it seems to touch my soul somehow.10
on Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer
9 Nov 2003, 9:38 AM
Somewhere on that beach there are spoilt peaches. Good job, A nice addition to all our lost father poems. I shall return the ten you gave me.
on an early discovery (reworking) by richa
9 Nov 2003, 9:42 AM
O.K. sounds right to me
on I'll Take You In My Arms by ilovecars131
9 Nov 2003, 9:53 AM
Touching. BTW, I love cars too
I refer you to my latest poem, On Visiting My Father.
I shall bestow a 10 on this li'l ditty to balance Dreamers unmerited 0