Re: a comment on bad boy taylor by rosiebailey	4-Nov-02/11:48 AM
Be careful U M, don't wanna tug on supermans cape, right?
Re: a comment on Three pointed star by INTRANSIT	4-Nov-02/11:40 AM
Ok all, I was hauling Mercedes (Three pointed star logo) out of Baltimore MD when the absurdity of a car ,with more gadgets than a 747, jammed this haiku into my stomach. It's manufactured in Germany,(any one remember the holocaust?). It comes standard with an SOS button, which when pushed alerts local authorities, fire ,rescue, or whatever you need. I.E., saves lives. I almost didn't take the load just because of the cost of these damn things. But, hypocrite I am said, "you gotta eat too". Ant to whomever pointed out the last line has 6 syllables:" Drats! I thought I had it nailed" Spelled "thousand" wrong too. shit.
Re: Slept by Nicholas Jones	2-Nov-02/3:59 PM
Painfully true. You are quite the writer Mr. Jones. Another for me to look up to, thank you.
Re: In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones	30-Oct-02/5:44 AM
Now THAT'S a Haiku! I'd like to see more of these, please.
Re: a comment on Faith by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:54 PM
Well then, I must thank you for your time! Fancy a Cognac?
Re: a comment on Hve you ever..... v2 by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:49 PM
Au naturel is best! This needs, shortening, maybe? too much stuff is a little overwhelming,yes>?
Re: a comment on Hve you ever..... v2 by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:33 PM
Kinkos would be cheap compared to this animal. Actually, I was going for the small personal battles that seem like big ones at the time, transitioning over to the... actually I think I see what you are saying. I kind of feel like I'm putting dollars in your g-string right now, ha ha.
Re: a comment on Faith by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:26 PM
True. But I need to see what frightens you because I need to learn how to be careful with my words, I may write a piece that nobody likes that is truly innocent because I chose the wrong phrasing. No, I'm not trying to write for everyone. Thats improbable. But 50\50 makes me quite happy.
Re: a comment on Hve you ever..... v2 by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:19 PM
Yes. And these stupid t\s computers are waylaying my pocketbook something fierce. Poemranker has become an addiction to me. Albeit a healthy one.
Re: Held by <~>	29-Oct-02/12:15 PM
Yes, Quite the teacher this one. Say,zzinnia? Could we revisit my "fire" piece? Theres an important lesson there and I'd kill myself if I missed it.(Not literally) Thanks. 9
Re: a comment on Worth the wait by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:08 PM
This is interesting, the piece I posted first, I thought to be the better piece. This one's getting all the attention. Hmmmm.
Re: a comment on Worth the wait by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:06 PM
And how are you today, -=Dark_Angel=-?
Re: a comment on Worth the wait by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/12:04 PM
Your last piece hits close to how it feels to live in a truck for long periods of time.
Re: The Black Hearted Sunflower by anitawit	29-Oct-02/2:38 AM
Not quite a haiku but excellent content.
Re: In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>	29-Oct-02/2:30 AM
Dittos on the last three comments. Fun and true.
Re: advice for the heated by <~>	29-Oct-02/2:26 AM
Yes,defrost. I like to watch;)
Re: a comment on Mystery on the Bridge by vulcan	27-Oct-02/6:30 AM
If you can fit Walt Whitman in your flat, you will have a bridge.
Re: Mystery on the Bridge by vulcan	27-Oct-02/6:28 AM
I like the rework, I can see the picture better now. Might've been me the first time. Anyway, this is beautiful and sad.good read.8
Re: dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined	25-Oct-02/4:25 PM
Yess, and this is really good my friend.
Re: Shadow's First Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29	25-Oct-02/4:23 PM
You gotta let go of that negative energy sometime ,dude. Nice haiku though