Re: Haffner's Mill by powerline |
1-Jan-03/8:08 AM |
I particularly like the last stanza. It tells me the storm was a financial or political storm or a mass of people. Not horrible weather. I picture an old church or building with gargoyles. I dinged you two for the "sale".
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Re: a comment on Februarys mother by INTRANSIT |
1-Jan-03/8:04 AM |
Would you mind telling me what you saw or felt when you read this? I'm so afraid of touching this one, but an outside view is tantamount to improvement,yes?
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Re: Haffner's Mill by powerline |
31-Dec-02/3:34 PM |
Dude, this is seriously good. I have something about a building that has yet to go past scrbbled notes. Thank you for the inspiration.
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Re: a comment on The Eskimo and the fish by INTRANSIT |
31-Dec-02/5:35 AM |
Freedoms of simplicity" is close. I'll work on another title,maybe. What else can you tell me from this ? Thank you Mrs G.
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Re: a comment on The Eskimo and the fish by INTRANSIT |
30-Dec-02/6:39 PM |
There's a story in a story here. Tell me what you see, please.
Thanks
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Re: Instantly by Quarton |
30-Dec-02/1:54 PM |
No matter how fast we move, Q, we're still too damn slow. Loved S-3. Big number.
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Re: Blues by Christof |
30-Dec-02/1:25 PM |
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Re: Little Johnie's Jihad by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
24-Dec-02/5:32 PM |
Yours rocks as well, sir.
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Re: a comment on Paying for Sin by kaykat |
24-Dec-02/2:53 PM |
Good for you KK. I don't do well with critical humor. You're off to a better start than I am.
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Re: a comment on Rewrite of a goof poem. by INTRANSIT |
24-Dec-02/2:51 PM |
I like the original better. Thanks for the P\F KK.
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Re: a comment on Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8 |
24-Dec-02/2:28 PM |
If honesty equals dick sucking, then I'm guilty. Any thing else is just political verbal trash. Now all I need is a Cocaine account and an 8yr college diploma and I can be as perfect as any other C.E.O.
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Re: Garden of confusion by Sugarbbybuttrfly |
24-Dec-02/9:46 AM |
Frustrated. Good. Dangerous. Last line needs a (?).
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Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
24-Dec-02/9:33 AM |
Too bad despair wins. Not my cup of tea,you might have guessed
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Re: Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8 |
24-Dec-02/9:25 AM |
Again, at my own peril, I liked it.
I think people are jealous of you because you are comfortable in your insanity. Self comfort is something to be admired. if it exists.
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Re: Thought by Quarton |
24-Dec-02/9:04 AM |
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Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
23-Dec-02/2:38 PM |
I feel something secondary going on here. Can't find it yet. I'll come back.
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Re: a comment on Foreplay by INTRANSIT |
23-Dec-02/2:30 PM |
I saw 'em too. friggin T\S kiosks! Round 'em all up for a revote whilst I don my Letter man costume.
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Re: strange beds (1983) by Bill Z Bub |
23-Dec-02/2:11 PM |
S-3 cornfuses me a bit. I am getting young lust from it though.
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Re: Here There Be Dragons by blkarakagain |
23-Dec-02/2:05 PM |
7 for the effort. tear it down, weld and machine the crank,magnaflux the rods, new slugs,jugs and plugs. bearings. It'll run good.
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Re: a comment on Foreplay by INTRANSIT |
23-Dec-02/10:17 AM |
you're awfully close. there's pasta involved. but what else?
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