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20 most recent comments by INTRANSIT (1581-1600) and replies

Re: Haffner's Mill by powerline 1-Jan-03/8:08 AM
I particularly like the last stanza. It tells me the storm was a financial or political storm or a mass of people. Not horrible weather. I picture an old church or building with gargoyles. I dinged you two for the "sale".
Re: a comment on Februarys mother by INTRANSIT 1-Jan-03/8:04 AM
Would you mind telling me what you saw or felt when you read this? I'm so afraid of touching this one, but an outside view is tantamount to improvement,yes?
Re: Haffner's Mill by powerline 31-Dec-02/3:34 PM
Dude, this is seriously good. I have something about a building that has yet to go past scrbbled notes. Thank you for the inspiration.
Re: a comment on The Eskimo and the fish by INTRANSIT 31-Dec-02/5:35 AM
Freedoms of simplicity" is close. I'll work on another title,maybe. What else can you tell me from this ? Thank you Mrs G.
Re: a comment on The Eskimo and the fish by INTRANSIT 30-Dec-02/6:39 PM
There's a story in a story here. Tell me what you see, please.
Thanks
Re: Instantly by Quarton 30-Dec-02/1:54 PM
No matter how fast we move, Q, we're still too damn slow. Loved S-3. Big number.
Re: Blues by Christof 30-Dec-02/1:25 PM
fan TASTIQUE!
Re: Little Johnie's Jihad by <{Baba^Yaga}> 24-Dec-02/5:32 PM
Yours rocks as well, sir.
Re: a comment on Paying for Sin by kaykat 24-Dec-02/2:53 PM
Good for you KK. I don't do well with critical humor. You're off to a better start than I am.
Re: a comment on Rewrite of a goof poem. by INTRANSIT 24-Dec-02/2:51 PM
I like the original better. Thanks for the P\F KK.
Re: a comment on Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8 24-Dec-02/2:28 PM
If honesty equals dick sucking, then I'm guilty. Any thing else is just political verbal trash. Now all I need is a Cocaine account and an 8yr college diploma and I can be as perfect as any other C.E.O.
Re: Garden of confusion by Sugarbbybuttrfly 24-Dec-02/9:46 AM
Frustrated. Good. Dangerous. Last line needs a (?).
Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit 24-Dec-02/9:33 AM
Too bad despair wins. Not my cup of tea,you might have guessed
Re: Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8 24-Dec-02/9:25 AM
Again, at my own peril, I liked it.
I think people are jealous of you because you are comfortable in your insanity. Self comfort is something to be admired. if it exists.
Re: Thought by Quarton 24-Dec-02/9:04 AM
Most excellent,sir.
Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit 23-Dec-02/2:38 PM
I feel something secondary going on here. Can't find it yet. I'll come back.
Re: a comment on Foreplay by INTRANSIT 23-Dec-02/2:30 PM
I saw 'em too. friggin T\S kiosks! Round 'em all up for a revote whilst I don my Letter man costume.
Re: strange beds (1983) by Bill Z Bub 23-Dec-02/2:11 PM
S-3 cornfuses me a bit. I am getting young lust from it though.
Re: Here There Be Dragons by blkarakagain 23-Dec-02/2:05 PM
7 for the effort. tear it down, weld and machine the crank,magnaflux the rods, new slugs,jugs and plugs. bearings. It'll run good.
Re: a comment on Foreplay by INTRANSIT 23-Dec-02/10:17 AM
you're awfully close. there's pasta involved. but what else?


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