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Haffner's Mill (Free verse) by powerline
Old buildings do cry
their walls forever sulking,
in what used to be
the center of town
Longing, for one more knock
at the front door
or just one more sale,
at the register's feet
So where have the builders gone?
The ones that poured their hearts
and worked their hands,
building and building
brick by brick
And when the largest storm
charged from the west
they left their souls to die,
for years and years
inside buildings that cry
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9817
Posted: December 31, 2002 1:33 PM PST; Last modified: December 31, 2002 1:33 PM PST
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