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The World, Some Statue's recollection (Free verse) by vulcan The snowballs counted
The windows closed;
The Statue outside
A memory recalled.
Up the ladder:
Haffner's Mill
Down the ladder:
Home
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Posted: January 5, 2003 1:07 AM PST; Last modified: January 5, 2003 1:07 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.904638 Overall Rank: 9818 Comments:
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suzanna @ 66.183.132.32
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5-Jan-03/2:47 AM
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good for a start. but something's lacking thou...
hephaestus you even threw me on this. could you explain, and help me get it?
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