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20 most recent comments by INTRANSIT (1601-1620) and replies

Re: a comment on One by adrenalize 22-Dec-02/3:41 PM
check " of people and places". A plain write no doubt, otherwise
,I'm witcha.
Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub 22-Dec-02/3:34 PM
The "madness" stanza trips some how between wall and door? Close to perfection ,I'd say.
Re: a comment on Foreplay by INTRANSIT 22-Dec-02/3:30 PM
fooled you,I did I did. Thanks.
Re: downtown bus by Bill Z Bub 20-Dec-02/5:17 PM
Hey! Down in front! damn people.
Re: a comment on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 20-Dec-02/4:08 PM
Thanks for the comments folks. I think it's quite possibly the worst thing I've ever written. i dunno.
Re: At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}> 20-Dec-02/12:48 PM
I still know nothing of music but what I hear. Self plug,last comment? I'll try to get to L.A. Next year. Home comp. on fritz. I'll need thos addresses later,again.
Re: joyriding by Bill Z Bub 19-Dec-02/7:04 PM
Hot for teacher? Definitely a thinker.
Re: March by <~> 19-Dec-02/4:49 PM
Beauty, as usual.
Re: A christmas thought by keatsImnot 18-Dec-02/6:10 PM
Nice twist of the knife there!
Re: a comment on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 18-Dec-02/5:18 PM
you are correct m'lady. I was looking at the floor when the answer appeared. cool? low on singles again.
Re: fa11ing by Bill Z Bub 18-Dec-02/5:12 PM
This kicks ass.
Re: a comment on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 18-Dec-02/5:04 PM
My first problem is not specifying the (board ) not necessarily the pieces. (Chess is a kick ass game. One that I will gladly suck at for the rest of my life.) I stay away from the media most of the time . The constant bad news is a strain on my muse. That's why I missed the Lott thing. Plus I think it's a yearly event that some political putz says something racially poor. Thanks for your help C. Not quite what I'm looking for though.
Re: a comment on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 17-Dec-02/6:40 PM
What a wonderful birthday gift you have given me,by the way. Your cordialness(sp?). Thank you.
Re: a comment on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 17-Dec-02/6:33 PM
Well, if I am one race and you are another,can we not stand close to one another and get along just fine? Lott? Sorry, unknown. I'm completely lost on the hierarchy angle. I agree with the change of the opening line though. Readers are quickly fickle.
Re: a comment on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 17-Dec-02/6:13 PM
Knock it off you two or I will repost the damn rose poem.
This happens to be what this poem is about:respecting others space. Being together without invasion. And a small racial metaphor as well.
Re: a comment on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 17-Dec-02/2:30 PM
yes, and thank you. I will try harder to relax in your presence.
do you think gws' right that it needs a little more? <60 Ill try ya later 10q
Re: a comment on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 17-Dec-02/2:24 PM
ok, mr knowit. Changed. And I'm listening. 6min left on stupid timer.
Re: a comment on A holiday warning by INTRANSIT 16-Dec-02/6:13 AM
Thanks for the comments people. I'ts just about not paying attention to what you are doing. thats all. I'm really sorry everyone spent their time on this. It's a throw-away. geez Y'all know I can do better. 10-4?
Re: a comment on A holiday warning by INTRANSIT 15-Dec-02/6:26 PM
not tonight dear, I have a headache.
Re: a comment on A holiday warning by INTRANSIT 15-Dec-02/6:22 PM
a most excellent suggestion, good Sir Knight. and thank you.


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