replying on Bra in a Bar by Dovina
24 Oct 2004, 11:10 AM
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on Market Day in Al-Karak, South Jordan by zodiac
24 Oct 2004, 9:38 AM
the blunderbuss line? wtf? The rest is excellent. mock me if you like.
replying on A Better God by Dovina
23 Oct 2004, 4:19 PM
(cracks whip) then get back in there and "beat" it up, damnit.
lol.
lol.
on From Then Till Now by Jeremi B. Handrinos
23 Oct 2004, 4:17 PM
...and then there were none.
on Bra in a Bar by Dovina
23 Oct 2004, 4:16 PM
Love it!!! Does my " trapped in a horseshoe" do justice?
on A Better God by Dovina
23 Oct 2004, 12:55 PM
You're staggered lines threw me. I was expecting a beat that didn't show. 30 Lashes with a soggy file box, and one hail mary over a bowl of fruity pebbles.
on Muslim woman at the office by zodiac
23 Oct 2004, 12:40 PM
It's like a flow chart with only 75% of the boxes filled in. I like it but it's a little too bony.
on Turbulence by horus8
18 Oct 2004, 2:31 PM
Flashbacks of fight club.
on Potential Tragedy by [mojo]
7 Oct 2004, 8:43 AM
jeez -loueeze.
on Powder Blue by [mojo]
7 Oct 2004, 8:39 AM
yes. a nice silk/satin groove.
on As I wait to shoot a mallard, I consider life by somemorepoetry
6 Oct 2004, 8:09 PM
Another poem that deserves at least some light but will get none. damnit.
on Beer Commercials by Jeremi B. Handrinos
6 Oct 2004, 7:39 PM
I got yanked into one of those mall survey things for beer once. I was sampling what came to be Black and Tan, I think. I think the sample tasted better than the final product.
on One True Instant by Dovina
6 Oct 2004, 7:36 PM
This hit me, like a Saxophone being put away.
on Coldfront by klosterfobik
1 Oct 2004, 6:33 AM
Novembers hope. ql
on Eagledale Drive by klosterfobik
1 Oct 2004, 6:26 AM
And someone has the gall to slap you with a one? Ha on them.
on Cold Afternoon. by Sasha
1 Oct 2004, 6:21 AM
appeared? Excellent. like I need to tell you that.
I heard he's coming. maybe in 2011.
I heard he's coming. maybe in 2011.
replying on Cold Afternoon. by Sasha
30 Sep 2004, 2:28 PM
Hit 'im again!!