Re: a comment on Bra in a Bar by Dovina	24-Oct-04/11:10 AM
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Re: Market Day in Al-Karak, South Jordan by zodiac	24-Oct-04/9:38 AM
the blunderbuss line? wtf? The rest is excellent. mock me if you like.
Re: a comment on For Ike by INTRANSIT	23-Oct-04/4:28 PM
Thank you.
Re: a comment on A Better God by Dovina	23-Oct-04/4:19 PM
(cracks whip) then get back in there and "beat" it up, damnit. lol.
Re: From Then Till Now by Jeremi B. Handrinos	23-Oct-04/4:17 PM
...and then there were none.
Re: Bra in a Bar by Dovina	23-Oct-04/4:16 PM
Love it!!! Does my " trapped in a horseshoe" do justice?
Re: A Better God by Dovina	23-Oct-04/12:55 PM
You're staggered lines threw me. I was expecting a beat that didn't show. 30 Lashes with a soggy file box, and one hail mary over a bowl of fruity pebbles.
Re: Muslim woman at the office by zodiac	23-Oct-04/12:40 PM
It's like a flow chart with only 75% of the boxes filled in. I like it but it's a little too bony.
Re: Orbs by Bachus	21-Oct-04/11:48 AM
Oh we do not. knock it off.
Re: Zipmark'd by fevriere	21-Oct-04/7:06 AM
I like the psuedo-beat thing going on here. I think it's better than mine.
Re: Turbulence by horus8	18-Oct-04/2:31 PM
Flashbacks of fight club.
Re: Potential Tragedy by [mojo]	7-Oct-04/8:43 AM
jeez -loueeze.
Re: Powder Blue by [mojo]	7-Oct-04/8:39 AM
yes. a nice silk/satin groove.
Re: As I wait to shoot a mallard, I consider life by somemorepoetry	6-Oct-04/8:09 PM
Another poem that deserves at least some light but will get none. damnit.
Re: Beer Commercials by Jeremi B. Handrinos	6-Oct-04/7:39 PM
I got yanked into one of those mall survey things for beer once. I was sampling what came to be Black and Tan, I think. I think the sample tasted better than the final product.
Re: One True Instant by Dovina	6-Oct-04/7:36 PM
This hit me, like a Saxophone being put away.
Re: Coldfront by klosterfobik	1-Oct-04/6:33 AM
Novembers hope. ql
Re: Eagledale Drive by klosterfobik	1-Oct-04/6:26 AM
And someone has the gall to slap you with a one? Ha on them.
Re: Cold Afternoon. by Sasha	1-Oct-04/6:21 AM
appeared? Excellent. like I need to tell you that. I heard he's coming. maybe in 2011.
Re: a comment on Cold Afternoon. by Sasha	30-Sep-04/2:28 PM
Hit 'im again!!