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Orbs (Free verse) by Bachus
What, with the blanket black and punched
And the sun no fun, and still drunk
I have to flashlight paths of grey clay
Sand-bag floods with no name
Flicker with the cavemen, and fossils
Procrastinate the stars between heaven,
And some idea I gathered along the way
Along with siblings, and microwaved tin.
Sparks are new to me; As bark on LSD
And if I concentrate on the me inside
Of me, I just might find another reason
To believe in souls, and Bigfoot, or
Demons, and no luck, white cloth, and hiccups.
Reasons to burn along with the sky kids
They have no lids, they have loose lungs
And a fearless way of being better, hung.
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Overall Rank: 2104
Posted: October 21, 2004 10:58 AM PDT; Last modified: October 21, 2004 10:58 AM PDT
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