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Bra in a Bar (Free verse) by Dovina The ambiance of bar
Of bra
Comfortable
Nicely appointed
Candle glitters behind bottles of scotch
Tingles behind cups of lace
Victoriaâs secret
Jonathanâs disclosure
Clevaged fringe
Carloâs stare
Pure luxury
Up the ladder:
There's a meteor showers before today's crucifixion
Down the ladder:
Cancer
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Posted: October 23, 2004 3:06 PM PDT; Last modified: October 23, 2004 3:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.576303 Overall Rank: 2405 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 64.12.116.67
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23-Oct-04/4:16 PM
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Love it!!! Does my " trapped in a horseshoe" do justice?
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Dovina @ 24.52.156.155
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24-Oct-04/9:41 AM
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"trapped in a horseshoe" What's that? Thanks.
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INTRANSIT @ 152.163.100.138
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24-Oct-04/11:10 AM
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Dovina @ 24.52.156.155
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24-Oct-04/12:09 PM
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A good poem from the other side of the bar and another side of life.
I've never worn a bra. It sounds wonderful. Both the bar and the bra seem to be located in a good neighborhood.-Upscale-
somehow "good" and "upscale" seem contracdictory.
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