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Free verse № 114094

Bra in a Bar

by Dovina

Member since 2004 · Posted 23 Oct 2004 · 6 comments

The ambiance of bar Of bra Comfortable Nicely appointed Candle glitters behind bottles of scotch Tingles behind cups of lace Victoria’s secret Jonathan’s disclosure Clevaged fringe Carlo’s stare Pure luxury

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[10] INTRANSIT 23-Oct-04/4:16 PM Reply
Love it!!! Does my " trapped in a horseshoe" do justice?
[n/a] Dovina › INTRANSIT 24-Oct-04/9:41 AM Reply
"trapped in a horseshoe" What's that? Thanks.
[10] INTRANSIT › Dovina 24-Oct-04/11:10 AM Reply
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[n/a] Dovina › INTRANSIT 24-Oct-04/12:09 PM Reply
A good poem from the other side of the bar and another side of life.
[10] Dan garcia-Black 24-Oct-04/8:30 AM Reply
I've never worn a bra. It sounds wonderful. Both the bar and the bra seem to be located in a good neighborhood.-Upscale-
[n/a] Dovina › Dan garcia-Black 24-Oct-04/9:42 AM Reply
somehow "good" and "upscale" seem contracdictory.