replying on Some poems by INTRANSIT
6 Nov 2007, 8:21 PM
Listening is the key to poetry, no? Gotta get my ears tuned somehow. Thanks for the help !
on Behind closed offices by lukehanney
6 Nov 2007, 6:47 PM
perhaps I should k.i.s.s. my pomes too.
on Why I took my ears off by INTRANSIT
6 Nov 2007, 6:45 PM
wow. that bad huh?
replying on Some poems by INTRANSIT
5 Nov 2007, 5:26 AM
Gonna try those changes. Let's see.
replying on Dulacca - for a day by Skamper
4 Nov 2007, 5:27 AM
Oh! My sincerest apologies.
replying on Some poems by INTRANSIT
4 Nov 2007, 5:23 AM
Did you notice any hiccups in the rhythm ? That's what I'm most worried about at this point. Thanks.
replying on Winter Moon by Musicman
4 Nov 2007, 5:20 AM
Yes, cleaner.
replying on Dulacca - for a day by Skamper
3 Nov 2007, 8:07 AM
A "slab" of beer ? That IS cool. What's a twelver called? A sixer?
on Voice of the World by Dovina
2 Nov 2007, 6:01 AM
My gut says, this is a jump off point for what you really want to say. Sit on it.
replying on Dulacca - for a day by Skamper
2 Nov 2007, 5:59 AM
I'm guessing it's Austrailia. (sp?) He mentions a road train. Aussies run like 6 or more 53 footers with one tractor, Hence, r/t. I too, really like this. The kelly pool. Ha! Almost missed it.
on homer simpson by malpaso
2 Nov 2007, 5:54 AM
I see a lyric. The first two lines being the refrain.
Add to it. Really.
Add to it. Really.
on Nomad's Oasis by Caducus
27 Oct 2007, 3:52 PM
Play with the line breaks, would be my suggestion.
From stanza two:
drank from sweat and tears devoured refusal
to stop searching for the promised land.
no vote. yet.
From stanza two:
drank from sweat and tears devoured refusal
to stop searching for the promised land.
no vote. yet.
on Dark Matter by Musicman
27 Oct 2007, 3:45 PM
Could you explain the term "movement" to me ? Using this piece as a for instance, if you like.
on Table for Two Please by Musicman
27 Oct 2007, 3:41 PM
Sorry. Even broken up, rest of the best, bugs me.
replying on Winter Moon by Musicman
27 Oct 2007, 3:39 PM
Almost forgot, for some reason I want > winter < at the end of the last. You're the one with the music though.
replying on Winter Moon by Musicman
27 Oct 2007, 3:37 PM
Steep? That's an understatement. 6 years plugging at this and still not and inch of progress. Or so it feels. How does it feel after 30?
on Bullfrog Night by Musicman
27 Oct 2007, 3:34 PM
Ha! I almost didn't like the word > chant. boo on me.