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homer simpson (Other) by malpaso
doh! i could be sitting here dead. doh! i could be breaking my bread. i could be seeking re-election, contemplating my my defection from the world of people who care. i could thank my lucky stars and be grateful for my scars because i'm lucky i have marge and am basking in dusk much sweeter than the cold early morning fears. i have run the race and conclude that living well embiggens the humblest man.

Down the ladder: Sarah Hine's Cries

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5791
Posted: October 30, 2007 4:40 PM PDT; Last modified: October 30, 2007 4:40 PM PDT
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[9] Dovina @ 75.82.86.162 | 1-Nov-07/8:46 AM | Reply
I like embiggens.
At least capitalize her name.
Line 4 adds ambiguity - good.
I don't know homer, would like to.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 69.23.157.197 | 2-Nov-07/5:54 AM | Reply
I see a lyric. The first two lines being the refrain.

Add to it. Really.
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