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The Saddest Part

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Jan 2005 · Edited 6 Jan 2005 · 1 comment

However she spoke the stutter came Even when she was sure of the answer But that was not the saddest part However she strode the hitch arose Even though she was sure of her path But that was not the saddest part However she loved the pain showed Even while she was sure of her heart But that was not the saddest part However she wept the tears never dried Even if she smiled for longer But that was not the saddest part However she tried the hole grew larger Even if she filled it with guilt But that was not the saddest part However we mocked her the words grew louder Even then she pled for us to stop And that that was the saddest part

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[9] Dan garcia-Black 6-Jan-05/7:20 PM Reply
I like this
and that's the saddest part.