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Table for Two Please (Free verse) by Musicman skin is our wrapper
this evening
the filling a mixture
of meats with meaning
giving life to the rest
of the best
of the serving
called man
Up the ladder:
it is my turn this season
Down the ladder:
sculpture
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Posted: October 24, 2007 1:48 AM PDT; Last modified: October 24, 2007 1:48 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.2145653 Overall Rank: 4412 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 69.23.157.197
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27-Oct-07/3:41 PM
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Sorry. Even broken up, rest of the best, bugs me.
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Musicman @ 192.208.44.100
> INTRANSIT
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4-Nov-07/1:56 AM
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Yep, I can see it. But this was one of those exercies in a stream of consciousness that took me just a minute to write. Unlike most, I will lt this one stand on its own merits but I do see your point. Thank you again for your gift!
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