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Ambition (Free verse) by Billy Fights
I caught myself today
The secrets planned in subconscious
Things I never worried about
Pressed first and foremost
Ambition, I get it now
I knew I was sick
But this is pathetic
Too late I am aware of my own trap
The clever cunning I crafted
Somehow without meaning to
Or at least knowing before hand
Ambition, I get it now
I knew I was sick
But this is pathetic
Accidents like this don't happen
Too many details in the designs
Tricked into outwitting myself
By new dreams of old faces
Ambition, I get it now
I knew I was sick
But this is pathetic
My inspiration and my motivation
Is born by the want of you
Forbidden fruit once tasted
Ambition, I get it now
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Weighted score: 5.2145653
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Posted: April 7, 2005 12:49 AM PDT; Last modified: April 7, 2005 12:49 AM PDT
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