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Ambition (Free verse) by Billy Fights
I caught myself today The secrets planned in subconscious Things I never worried about Pressed first and foremost Ambition, I get it now I knew I was sick But this is pathetic Too late I am aware of my own trap The clever cunning I crafted Somehow without meaning to Or at least knowing before hand Ambition, I get it now I knew I was sick But this is pathetic Accidents like this don't happen Too many details in the designs Tricked into outwitting myself By new dreams of old faces Ambition, I get it now I knew I was sick But this is pathetic My inspiration and my motivation Is born by the want of you Forbidden fruit once tasted Ambition, I get it now

Up the ladder: Point Blank
Down the ladder: Decide

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Weighted score: 5.2145653
Overall Rank: 4324
Posted: April 7, 2005 12:49 AM PDT; Last modified: April 7, 2005 12:49 AM PDT
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[4] Dovina @ 12.72.8.237 | 7-Apr-05/12:40 PM | Reply
No very well put together, not clear, chiches, and the repetition doesn't help.
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