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sculpture (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
here i stand roughly hewn from a block lifeless too excavated in tawdry glint eye collapse with consent

Up the ladder: Table for Two Please
Down the ladder: Indian Song

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Weighted score: 5.2145653
Overall Rank: 4413
Posted: August 11, 2005 8:12 PM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2005 8:12 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] ALChemy @ 65.188.89.69 | 12-Aug-05/6:44 AM | Reply
This is a concrete poem. Pretty neat on too.
[7] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 12-Aug-05/7:25 PM | Reply
The first 4 lines are good, given the tight restraint you've chosen. The last 4 lines drift from the theme.
[8] nypoet22 @ 75.74.32.242 | 7-Mar-10/6:54 PM | Reply
neat!
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