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sculpture
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ThePariahDog
here i stand roughly hewn from a block lifeless too excavated in tawdry glint eye collapse with consent
Dovina
12-Aug-05/7:25 PM
The first 4 lines are good, given the tight restraint you've chosen. The last 4 lines drift from the theme.
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