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_______ (Free verse) by Dovina An egret stands beside the trail
Voyeursâshe and I
Rest today, tomorrow fly
Up the ladder:
My Sinatra
Down the ladder:
Tears
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Posted: October 24, 2007 10:59 AM PDT; Last modified: October 24, 2007 10:59 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.2384057 Overall Rank: 4134 Comments:
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Ranger @ 86.131.50.184
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25-Oct-07/2:03 AM
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It sounds fantastic, although I'm not sure that "underlined nothing" is such a catchy title...
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Dovina @ 66.215.80.177
> Ranger
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26-Oct-07/4:18 PM
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It's because haiku is best untitled. Of course if I called it haiku, I'd only get the dunce comment "5-7-5."
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