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_______ (Free verse) by Dovina
An egret stands beside the trail Voyeurs—she and I Rest today, tomorrow fly

Up the ladder: The Narrow Way
Down the ladder: Seamus McGee

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4114
Posted: October 24, 2007 10:59 AM PDT; Last modified: October 24, 2007 10:59 AM PDT
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[8] Ranger @ 86.131.50.184 | 25-Oct-07/2:03 AM | Reply
It sounds fantastic, although I'm not sure that "underlined nothing" is such a catchy title...
[n/a] Dovina @ 66.215.80.177 > Ranger | 26-Oct-07/4:18 PM | Reply
It's because haiku is best untitled. Of course if I called it haiku, I'd only get the dunce comment "5-7-5."
[10] INTRANSIT @ 69.23.157.197 | 27-Oct-07/3:22 PM | Reply
I likes.
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